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| ' A Sin of Loving You ' Chapter 1 | Story by : Mui Lin Kwan |
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: Patida, Joni Anwar, Nou, Poun, Anan, Joni's
dad, and others.... Note : Hi! You are welcome to read this new lakorn of mine.... I don't know if it's gonna be long or not though.... The background story of this is a little too confusing, and if you don't get it then HAHA! You're just gonna have to figure that out yourself.... If the things I say in this little story offends you, please don't take it personal because remember like I always say.... It's just a story! Background Story - There was a girl that loves this guy very much, but then he didn't love her back! He had a secret he held inside and if you read this story you'll find out what he's been up to.... And also you'll know why he didn't say he love her..... Our story begins....... Chapter 1 On a hot rainy summer day, there was a girl who was really lonely. Her name was Patida Sawanfa.She was very pretty with a nice figure, nice eyes, average height, and very shy when it comes to guys. She had nothing else to do, but to stare, stare, and stare at the falling rain. She had thought it will never stop raining. So a few minutes later she fell asleep to the sound of a flute that was coming from a far distance. Who in their right mind would be playing a flute during this horrible heavy rain! A few minutes later the music stopped, and Patida woke up.... She gave a big yawn and went down stairs. " Mama! Papa! Is anyone home?! " she yelled out. There was no answer.... It was silent for a while until she heard the living room door slammed shut! And in came a man, it was her dad. He had just came back from work to check on his 16 year old little girl, Patida. Soon later all her family arrived from the grocery store they went to. " Patida, what did you do while we were gone? You didn't broke anything did you? Tell us Patida, " asked her mom. Patida replied, " No ma I didn't break anything! Why are you always curious of what I do?! " " Look, young lady I am not gonna stand for this, I am your mother. I'm just worried that you might hurt yourself while we are gone," exclaimed her ma. Butting in the conversation, her pa said, " Alright everybody, let's get dinner ready and eat." After dinner Patida went up to her room again. She looked out at the window and she heard that flute playing again. This time she did not fell asleep. " Since my family is not appreciative of what I actually do for them, I'm gonna run away from home! Shoot! I got enough money to go to Thailand to go live with my friend over there, so Thailand here I come!" she had said to herself. She was standing in the rain for a long time wishing that a Taxi would come already and take her to the airport, but it didn't. A few minutes later she got tired of waiting so she walked to the airport instead... Thirty minutes later the rain stopped and she got to the airport. " I have to call my friend that I'm coming and tell her to pick me up by tomorrow morning," she thought. So she made the call, then she went on to get her ticket and passport. Next morning....... She finally arrived at the Bangkok airport and she saw her friend there to pick her up. " Hey what took you so long?! " exclaimed her friend." Sorry! Gosh, I came didn't I," corrected Patida. Her friend's name went by Nou Luwansitida." Hey let's go to my house now, or do you just wanna go tour the city first?" Nou said sarcastically. " No, let's go home instead, kinda tired right now," replied Patida." Let's go home then!" Nou cheerfully added. When they got home, Patida have noticed something when she went inside the living room of her friend's house. " Hey what's wrong? Are you uncomfortable?" asked Nou. " No, no, don't get me wrong! I love this place. You're so lucky you get to live by yourself," Patida commented. " Actually, I don't live alone. I live with my horrible cousin, Joni! " said Nou. " Okay, where is this horrible cousin of yours you always talking about?" asked Patida. " He's up stairs playing his god damn flute! " Nou replied in ignorance. " Wow! He plays flute! Is he even good though?" curiously replied Patida. " He's very good. It's like he could make you be in a trance," said Nou. " He must be good then. Can I go see him play? That is if he is here," said Patida. "Alright let's go see him play. He's up in his room right now," Nou replied. Patida followed her upstairs till they came to a door that had the sign that said, " Beware of the Joni Creature. " " Well, here we are. His horrible room," Nou said quickly. They opened the door of Joni's room and saw him undressing! " Oh my god we are so sorry!" they both apologized. " Damn't close the door! Damn these people! " yelled Joni. " Oh right, right, sorry," both had said. They both closed the door. " Damn! I never knew my cousin had a nice ass body!" claimed Nou. A few minutes later Joni came out. " What do you guys want? I know you want something if you come in my room like that," claimed Joni. " Um, yeah, my friend wanted to hear you play the flute, Joni meet Patida and Patida meet Joni my cousin. " Nice to meet you," both blurted out. " What a beautifull name for a girl. The name meaning " Princess" in Thai, " Joni commented. He took her hand out slowly and kissed it as a gentleman would do. Patida's face started to blush. " Is there anything wrong miss?" asked Joni. " No, there's nothing wrong, can you play the flute now?" blurted Patida. " ( laughing ) Yeah sure, why not. Let's go inside my room first," said Joni. When they went inside his room, Patida felt a strong vive coming from Joni. The vive she felt was as if they had met before, which in her life time she never met him till now. Joni started playing his flute. Patida felt strange about the song that he is playing. It was the same song she heard when she was back at home in America with her parents on that rainy night. But it couldn't be him playing the flute, or could it? She couldn't have heard it all the way from Thailand to America, because that is just impossible. What did this mean? Was it her fate? Is it her way to find the person she will love for life? Or is it the cause of her death? She was confused herself. All night she thought about the music of the flute that Joni was playing. It had a nice melody and she thought that maybe Joni could be the one for her. Could he be the one for her? Next morning, Patida woke up early to go exercising with her friend and Joni came a long too. " Hey where are we gonna go jog at?" asked Patida. " We're going to jog till we get atleast 1 mile around the city, okay," said Joni. " Okay!" Nou and Patida said together. After their jog they went back home to change and go show Patida around the city. " I'm hungry, let's go find a place to eat," Nou said. " Alright, let's go to McDonalds then," Joni replied. They got to McDonalds and a person spotted them. It was Dome that saw them. " Hey wassup Joni! Dude who you got here with you?" Dome asked impolitely. " Oh you know my cousin Nou right, well this is her friend, Patida. Patida meet Dome and Dome meet Patida," answered Joni. "Nice to meet you Patida," Dome said romantically. " And nice to meet you too," replied Patida. " Hey Joni are you guys finish eating yet?! Hurry," said Nou impatiently. " Okay we're finish!" both Joni and Patida replied at once. While Joni was walking and leading the way to the car, Patida was checking him out. She thought to herself, " Who is he really? " " Hey are you checking my cousin out?!" Nou said jokingly. " Shut up! Whatever!" exclaimed Patida. She thought to herself, " Maybe I am checking him out." When she almost reached to Joni's car, she stopped for a while and thought of what her parents are doing right now... Are they even looking for her? " Oh well! Forget about them Patida! They don't even care if I go or not! What kind of parents are they?!" she screamed. " Hey are you just gonna stand there or come with us?!" yelled out Nou. " Gosh! I'm coming!" yelled back Patida. She got inside the car and kept on staring at Joni the whole until home. Joni was so mysterious to her. It was as if she and him in their past life were lovers or something. She felt like he had been keeping a secret from everybody. From that time on, Patida fell in love with Joni. She swore that she will never leave his side no matter what happens, good or bad it doesn't matter to her now that she has felt how it was to fall in love for the first time. Are they truly ment for each other? Or is it just one of thoughts Patida would like to be true?????? ..........TO BE CONTINUED ....
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