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' A Sin of Loving You ' Chapter 2   Story by : Mui Lin Kwan
 
Characters : Patida, Joni Anwar, Nou, Poun, Anan, Joni's dad, and others....

Note :
Hi! You are welcome to read this new lakorn of mine.... I don't know if it's gonna be long or not though....
The background story of this is a little too confusing, and if you don't get it then HAHA! You're just gonna have to figure that out yourself.... If the things I say in this little story offends you, please don't take it personal because
remember like I always say.... It's just a story!


Background Story -

There was a girl that loves this guy very much, but then he didn't love her back! He had a secret he held
inside and if you read this story you'll find out what he's been up to.... And also you'll know why he didn't say he
love her..... Our story begins.......


Chapter 2


Okay, where did we left off..... Oh yeah! It's where Patida fell in love with Joni and swore she will never and
she means never leave his side no matter what happens, good or bad she doesn't care.....

On their way home Joni noticed that Patida kept on staring at him. He's wondering why of coarse...."Hey
Pat, do you mind me calling you Pat? Anyways, you are really creeping me out," he said reluctantly. " What you
mean? I didn't do anything," Patida said sweetly. " I mean quit staring at me that way. You are really freaking
me out!" Joni told her. " Oh I'm sorry, I didn't mean to stare at you that way, it's just that I kinda feel weird around
you," answered Patida.

Joni dropped them off at the house while he went somewhere else. " Hey where do you think he is going?"
asked Patida. " How would I know the crazy things he's doing?!" said Nou. " Well I just thought that you would
kinda know since you're his cousin," Patida said in a angelic matter." Yeah whatever you say," proclaimed
Nou. During this talk that Patida and Nou are having Joni was driving to a nearby mountain where he can play
his flute in peace. When he got to his destination, he started to play his beautiful flute. A few minutes later at
Nou's house, Patida heard the flute coming from a nearby mountain... How could she have heard the flute?
Nobody else heard it.... Does she have magical ears? It can't be or could it?

During all this, the phone rang.... Nou picked up the phone and answered it, " Hello and who is this? "
" It's me Nalida Siharath, Anyways wassup! What ya doing anyway? " " Oh hey Da! Oh yeah did you know that
Patida came here! " exclaimed Nou. " Oh shit! For reals! Let me talk to her foo! Damn it been like 4 years
since we talked!" Da said excitedly. " Hey Pat! Come get the phone, it's Da! Remember her right?" said Nou. "
Alright! I'm coming!( picked up the phone )Hello." " Hey Pat remember me Nalida!" screamed Da. " Oh shit it is
you! Wassup girl! Foo skip talking to the phone, come over instead!" yelled Patida.

After a while, Da had arrived... She was wondering where Nou's cousin, Joni went to. " Hey foo!" said Da.
They invited her in. " Huy, where's Joni at?" asked Da. " Oh he went somewhere," answered Nou. "Foo, I have
to admit your cousin looks fine!" exclaimed Da and Patida. Later, Joni came back and it was already midnight.
While Patida was asleep she had a dream.... Her dream was in a dark lonely place with nobody but her in the
dream. It feel like she have lost everything and had fallen into death. " Hey Pat! Pat!" Da said.
" Ahhhhh!!!!! What happened?" asked Patida. " You were having a bad dream, now go back to sleep
okay," Da said cheerily. " How did you get in my room? And what are you doing here?" asked Patida. "Uhhh....
Maybe I'm in here because, ummm.....You invited me for a sleep over! Stupid, don't you remember me?" Da
proclaimed. " Oh, I forgot," answered Patida. " Hey do you hear that noise? It's coming from the hallway, let's
go check what it is," Da said bravely.

The both went to check on what was making the noise in the hallway. " Hey switch on the lights so we could
see," whispered Da. Patida then switched on the lights... It turned out the thing they thought was a monster
turned out to be Joni caught in a fishing net trap that Nou had set up so no robber would get away. "Hey let me
out! Fuck!" Joni said angerly. Nou came running out of her room with a ax thinking that she caught a robber. "
What the hell! Get me down!" Joni screamed. " Oops! So sorry! Here I'll let you down," Nou apologized. She
letted him down and when she letted him down she accidentally dropped him on his head! Ouch! That must
hurt! " Stupid ass! What the hell! You're not suppose to drop me on my head!" yelled Joni. " Finally! Your finally
back from where ever you went!" Da said sarcastically. " Yeah! Where ever you went anyways?!" Nou asking
curiously. Joni getting back up on his feet said," Shut up stupid ass! None of your business!" Joni yelled. " Fine
be that way!" Nou answered back. " Joni, where did you went?" Patida asked nicely. " I ummm.... I ummm..... I
went to a mountain to get some time off," Joni told her. " Oh now I see, you tell her but not us!" Da said. " Just
shut up!" Joni screamed. Joni started to get annoyed so he went inside his room. During the night, Patida went
inside Joni's room to talk to him. " Hey Pat! What your doing here?" he asked. " I wanted to ask you about
something. Everyday I hear this flute playing the song you play and I'm wondering could it be you that is playing it? It has to be you right?" asked Patida.

Joni was shocked when she asked him that. " Hey you'll never know!" he answered cheerfully. " Could it?"
she asked again. " Look what's your point of asking me? I don't know anything of what you wanna know about,"
he replied. " Joni are you the one?" she asked. " Hey look I don't know!" Joni said getting annoyed. "Joni, what
if I told you I love you and that I will never leave your side no matter what happens, good or bad?" she asked.
Joni thinking to himself of what to say has no words to talk back. " Look I don't love you I'm sorry," he answered.
" Then how come I always hear the sound of your flute when even though you're so far away?! I love you Joni!"
she said emotionally. Tears were pouring down from her cheeks when she heard Joni's last words of the night,
they were, " I don't love you and I can't love you." She felt she was in a world of misery. The man she loved didn't love her and her family doesn't care about her. She was in tears........

" Okay, I wanna ask you something else, do you have a secret that you never ever told anybody?" she
asked wiping the tears off her eyes. " Yes, I do," he answered. " And what is it?" she asked. " Look don't be so
nosy! I'm not gonna tell you, when the time comes right then I'll tell," he replied. " Fine if you are gonna be this
way I just don't feel like talking to you anymore!" she exclaimed stomping out of Joni's room. " I'm sorry, but I just can't tell you now. Please forgive me, I love you too, but I just can't tell you. If I do, I'll just endanger your life once more," he said in his thoughts.....

..........TO BE CONTINUED ....
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