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| 'First Tears' Episode 1 | Story by : IdeaZ |
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Nat, Somchai(Tao), Num, Mos, Momay, Earn Story Lines: 1. Nat, Somchai 2. Nat, Num, Earn 3. Somchai, Mos, Momay Note from Me: Sorry if you cant understand what Im trying to write because of my grammer, I just type the story from my head So this is my rough draft and final draft. BUT if you LIKE the STORY, KEEP TUNING In at IDOLWOLRD. Ill be updating my LAKORN every WEEK or SO. Review- (these parts are on the webboard posted early) In the 1960s, a young woman is rape and had a baby girl. Her family felt disgraceful and wanted the baby to be vanish from the family. The young woman left the innocent baby in the woods, leaving a burnt symbol on the babys foot. 18 years later, this innocent baby girl, Nat grew and became a criminal with a partner, Somchai. They werent just partners, but the only friends they have are each other. When Nat accidentally made a mistake and the police chased them, a young man arrested them, Num. Luckily Nat and Somchai was set free because the police had nothing against them. Although Nat had saved the day by throwing the suitcase of money away, Somchais only worry was their masters need for the money. ----Next-new scene---- Mos lay in bed, still in his dream. The morning sunshine shines on his eyes and he flips over with the blanket over his eyes. The alarm, next by his bed, rang and he hits it with his arm. Shut up!! Mos yell; he was half-asleep and half-awake. This was a daily routine for Mos; he would always wake up late and grumpy. But this was his lucky day; his only sister was home, for the time, on vacation from her overboard studies. As Mos was about to fall deeply asleep again, his bedroom door swung open. Pee kah. Bother wake up, dont you have to go to work? Momay ask. She jumps on the bed and started to bug her brother. Momay, give your big brother a break. Im so tired. Mos tells Momay. Tired of what? Momay ask him, knowing that her brother wasnt just tired because of his lack of sleep but there was something else. Mos got up and looks at his sister. Sometime I wonder if you know me more than I know myself. Mos could see a smile forming on his sisters face, Ay, I guess Im going to be stuck babysitting you for months, huh? Mos jokes with Momay and hates it when he reminds her that shes the baby of the family. Its only for 3-4 months, Pee kah. And anyway Im 17. I could take care of myself. Momay got up and walks toward the door, then she turns around, Oh bro. Moms says Im helping out at the company, so I guess Ill see you at work. Mos gives a confessing look at his sister. Helping out at the company, he repeated Momays words, helping? Sis. You could have the company. INTERNATIONAL JEWERY TRADE building The building stood tall and never-ending toward the sky. Mos parks his car in his parking spot with his name painted on the cement. Momay all excited and ready to enter this building, she steps out of the car and runs toward the entrance. WOW! This amazing! I cant believe that we own this thing. Momay enters, while Mos runs behind trying to catch up with her. They both enter and every employee greeted him. Sawutdee kah/krup The voices of the employees echoed through the halls. Mos office was big and comfortable with chairs and a red sofa. Momay enters the room and looks around, she saw in the corner a TV, and another corner a stereo system, the walls was covered with posters and maps. She turn to her brother and said, Pee (Bro) is this your office or your bedroom? Mos were over at his wooded desk in his chair, he didnt respond to Momays question but only gave her gesture to leave the room. She sticks out her tongue at him and left. It was just a matter of time that Momay would run into the room again. Momay stormed into Mos office and reported to him that he had to go to a meeting immediately The round table in this meeting office filled up the space. Momay sat at the end next to her brother, while others in blue and black suits sat around the table with files and papers in front of them. During the meeting, Mos found out that he had to make some business trip to foreign countries: England, France, China, India. Mos was the boss of International Jewelry Trade Co., and had meeting to intend to. Although he was the boss and owner of this international and popular company, he had a deep secret that he didnt want his parents to know. It wasnt just a secret but his dreams. International Jewelry Trade Co. was given to him by his parents, but he didnt want the business; he wanted to be independent and travel the world before he would settled down or die, make his own future for himself. But his father left him the business to take care of and the massive amount of money before he passed away. The meeting ended and Mos next step was to find a new secretary. Pee, can I be your secretary? I believe Ill be the best you ever have. Momay asks her brother hoping for a yes from her bother. But Mos replied, No, Im gonna be gone for some time and need someone who is experience. Understand? This made Momay angry, knowing that her brother was right. She looks at her brother and yells, Youve told me that you hate this company and wish you were somewhere else. You dont even care for this business! If mom was gone like father, you probably sell this company. I think that you arent experience enough for the position you are in too . She pauses because she could see that her brother knew that she was talking of the truth. She felted mean and disrespectful, she didnt say anything else but whisper, Im sorry. When you hire the secretary, please hire someone who you think is good for the job and dont just choose anyone because I know that this company doesnt really mean anything to you. She leaves the room. ----------Scene II------- In streets of Bangkok, Somchai and Nat walks along the sidewalk. Dont worry Nat, Ill talk to master just dont say anything or well be in deep troubles, okay? Nat assure him with a nod. They enter a room, with cemented walls, and water dripped from the ceiling. It was a dark and misty atmosphere, and out of nowhere a mid-age man stood like a statue in the dark appears. Do you have the suitcase? The mystery man asks. Sorry, master. There were some troubles we had encountered, while on this mission. Please excuse me, I was not careful. Somchai explains to their master. But to his surprise, the master looks at Nat and knew this was her doing. He gave Nat a nasty, evil look and says to Somchai, Because you are my best worker and I know that this was not all your fault, I forgive you. But next time if you fail .well you know what will happen now listen this next assignment I have for you is major and no mistakes must occur, so Nat is not to be in this at all. The master demands. Nat could feel the feeling she always feel when shes around master, left out. But I am part of this team, I will also have the work done. Please master. Nat says trying to convince him that she is as good as a man. FOOL! I make the decision. Only a man can do a mans job. Dont interfere., The masters says and looks at Somchai and gives him a handful of money, Somchai, take this money and go buy some descent suit, this next major assignment is a risk for me and you, so remember what I said about Nat. No interference! Now go, tomorrow you will be a new member at the International Jewelry Trade Co. hahaha The master laughs and leaves. International Jewelry trade building? Somchai ask himself and knew this assignment was going to be a risky one, the Company is a known well successful company throughout Thailand and internationally. Tommorrow, well see. ..........
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