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| I've Been Waiting : Chapter 1-3 | Story by : SwEeTThAiCAnDeE |
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all da peepz dat read my other lakorn called 'The Wall
That Seperates Us' hope u guyz liked it cuz herez another
lakorn i'm workin on and hopefully u peepz will like diz
one too soo email meeh @ anytime to let me know wutcha
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Sweetthaicandee@aol.com Characters: Tik Jedsadaporn Pondee, Sara Malakul, Nat Myria, Florence Vanida,Louis Scott, Teya Rojers, And of course me hehe (Montira) or (Wahree), and more... Chapter 1 1940...Bangkok: Something was coming...and nobody could stop it ,it blew the hot wind against the faces of people in Bangkok. It was happening too soon and too fast that Wahree couldnt except it, he was going off to Europe where the bombing were happening. She didnt want him to go but he had too he had to go to school there, "the japanese were bombing us too..."Wahree wrote to her lover." I couldnt even go to the market without fearing that the sirens would aproach my ears and that I had to start running for my life..."she conitnued in the sad yet long letter. He clutched her letter tightly the bombs were coming ...he peered up into the sky shading his face seeing the doom that was aproaching him and his friends. Why? He thought to himself, was he about to be seperated from her from his only love? He felt a chill crawl up his back that made him shiver. He saw women ,children, and men running with their families covering their babies heads so the bomb wouldnt scattered onto them. He looked at his friend agonized..."This is it..." His murmured grinningas if he wasnt fearing at all, but he knew he was ...he knew his friend was fearing for the worst. He too was fearing not because he was going to die in the most horrific way but the fear of not saying goodbye, not to hear Wahrees voice for the lasttime. Not to die in her arms, not to be able to kiss her soft lips and not to gaze in her eyes. This meant soo much more to him then dieing with his fellow companions, he took a deep breath and snickered to himself, feeling amused about this happening. He saw something coming towards him from the sky he knew what it was...he didnt move. He placed the scented letter in his pocket closing his eyes the last thing he saw was Wahrees face...her sweet face smiling. Wahree heard the news, she fell to her kness praying that it wasnt true that he wasnt dead and that soon he would come back and marry her, have a family with her. But now she was alone he wasnt coming back was he? She thought to herself crying, she took his picture holding it against her lips sobbing. "My love...I'll always love you..." She looked at her table seeing the sharp object, it glistened against the sunlight shining in. She looked at it hard...is this right to do? She thought. She got up slowly taking the object in her hand , her breath came in short gasped. Last tears were coming down her warm cheeks, she had on the dress he liked most ,now she was going to be with him...forever. No matter how many lifetimes she will follow...she will feel his sweet touch and kiss once again. She held the object and the picture tigtly. Placing the picture on her heart and the object against it, she took one last living breath before the object went through her heart. She felt nothing just a sharp pain, the place was getting darker and darker. But she saw a light...a golden light...she reached for it embracing the warmth. "I'll wait for you..." She whispered, her eyes closing making the tears fall gently down her cheek. Chapter 2 2001... The day broke and the kids of the university was rushing in the halls getting to their classes. Tik stood waiting patiently for his friends, he was always first to arrive and his friends always last. He heard the tardy bell ring, he shook his head, taking a last sip of his drink. He tossed the cup into the trash and headed towards the classroom, without his friends. He was halfway there when he heard screeching and laughing, he turned to see what was going on. He spotted three guys heading his way holding a messed up folder, paper scattered everywhere. One was tall, with light skin and hazel eyes, the other one tan holding his glasses so it wouldnt fall off his nose. The other one constantly teasing the guy with the glasses. They rushed over to Tik still taunting and playing, "Hey dude I swear your so clumsy!" One of them said leaning against the locker taking a breath. The guy with the glasses looked at him madly and rushed into class without saying a word. "Why did you have to go and do that Nat!!" Louis yelled walking in. Tik and Nat look at eachother, Tik still confuse of what happened shrugged and walks in leaving Nat by himself. Tik set his books down feeling a chill running up his back, he shivers looking around, he sees his classmates giving him a look as if he was crazy. He shook his head smiling too himself feeling foolish. The teacher walks in a thick suitcase in one hand and a few books in the other, she comes up to the potium taking out her rollbook, she calls out a few names. "Tik Jedsadaporn are you here?" She calls out searching for him , he raises his hand giving her a polite smile. "Krup." He replied. She nodded continueing calling other students names. "I've been waiting..." A cool breeze blows in knocking down his papers and pencil. The voice...it sounds so familiar like a dream, he kneels down gathering his things. He felt his breath cooling and beads of sweat broke on his eyebrows, he excuses himself by wiping it off with the sleeve of his shirt. "I've been waiting..." The voice continues in his ears over and over like a broken record. He sits down slowly trying to figure out what the voice was about..."I've been waiting?" He whispered to himself, he pulls out a pen tapping it on the desk, also jotting notes down. "Okay class todays history topic...World War ll." She announces all proud. He heard a girl screaming faintly in the back he turns to see who it was but it wasnt the girls sitting it is coming from his head. He blinks , but as he opened up his eyes once more it wasnt his school he saw it was horrible pictures of the japanese marching in Thailand , bombs were set off, it scatters to his face making him groan. He covered his bloody face crying for help from his classmates but he didnt see them. "Noooooo!!!!" He yelled.He saw his friends being blown up and the whole city dead before his eyes. He misses his mom, he misses his sister, he cried for them thinking they were dead. He stumbles to a nearby house, it was an old thai house and a cool pond stretched in front of it, "Help..." He wimpered reaching for a hand but nobody saw him. Nobody was helping him, he went into a nearby room closing the door , he looked around finding a firstaid kit to bandage his eye. He went through the things messing it up. He pounded his fist to the floor falling to his side, feeling angry that he was helpless. "I will love you always..." He saw a girl, young and beautiful standing with a picture and a sharp object. He didnt see her face clearly but he smelles a sweet light scent coming from her, a flower smell. He knew in his mind somehow that she must be beautiful. He felt so much love and sadness between them, he felt like going to her hugging her kissing her. He wanted to die in her arms. " I'll be waiting ..." He heard her soft voice , he also saw blood trickling down to the floor. He gasped rushing to help her, "No dont!!" He shouted trying to get to her but he couldnt. He couldnt save her, "Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!" He woke up to the sight of his classmates and teacher staring at him. "Hey are you okay?" Nat ask shaking Tiks shoulder. Tik panted looking for the girl but he didnt see her, Nat started to laugh hitting Fern on the back making his glasse fall to the floor. "Hey!!" Fern said picking them up brushing the dust off. "Maaan you look like you had some bad dream." Fern said examining Tik, Fern nodded pointing to Tik who was still not tune into the real world. "I know what this is about a case of...pastlife flashback." Everybody gasps, "Are you crazy? It cant be you be reading too many books fool." Nat said walking back to his desk. "It is thought I know it!" Everybody walks away leaving Fern still talking to himself, he look at Tik for awhile . "Is it true you saw something didnt you?" Fern ask fixing his glasses. Tik nodded still shock about the experience. "Who are you...?" Tik said to himself picturing the girl in his mind. Chapter 3 Her dark room lighted up with one snap of her fingers, she felt tired and her energy was absorb out of her body. She went to her bed lying down on her side, crying. She knew he was here all along , she knows he will remember who he was and who he loved. She will make him remember and nobody will stand in her way, she saw him today his bangs brushing against his face his laughter fell upon her ears once more. She can almost taste his sweet kiss, she felt dizzy and hot. The feeling she got when they first met at the market, she was looking at cloths and he came over pretending to look at them too. They were only 17, they parted without seeing eachother, it was a tragedy she couldnt except. But now he's here and alive, still handsome , still breathtaking. She loves him soo much it didnt change after all these years of searching and yearning. "I love you p'Tik." She said still crying, still overwhelm by the feeling she once was having again. Ohhh how she misses that love feeling. She got up looking at her hands seeing herself dissolve away..."I'm not really here but I will be I promise you...we will love again." She said disappearing .............
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