Thaiidols world : Lakorn - I've Been Waiting

To all da peepz dat read my other lakorn called 'The Wall That Seperates Us' hope u guyz liked it cuz herez another lakorn i'm workin on and hopefully u peepz will like diz one too soo email meeh @ anytime to let me know wutcha think otay?! well enjoy!! Email addy: Sweetthaicandee@aol.com

Characters: Tik Jedsadaporn Pondee, Sara Malakul, Nat Myria, Florence Vanida,Louis Scott, Teya Rojers, And of course me hehe (Montira) or (Wahree), and more...

Chapter 4

It was quiet, too quiet, like a ghost town as Tik and his whole team of
friends arrived in Ayutaya (the old thai capitol). He had been ordered to do
an assignment with his classmates most of them had been specially selected by
the professor, they were to come sleep for two nights and leave. And every
hour they were supposed to be filming and tape recording their experiences
there, if there was supposedly something weird happening they should call and
report it right away. Nat took out his lunch sack and ate quietly by himself
under a tall tree that spread out its branches rich with leaves that welcomed
cool breezes againts his face. The day was hot and humid it seemed regular
for Thailand to have this weather. Tik looked around for tourists but there
was none just his friends and an eerie feeling in his heart. "I
feel....weird." He said siting next to Nat who was chomping on some chips,
"Weird? What do yah mean weird?" He asked, his voice thick with food. Tik
shook his head leaning back against the giant tree, he felt stupid and lazy
today like he was put on drugs or somesort of beguiling spell. "I dont know
just weird man." "Its like...I've been here before...but I havent." Nat
starts to laugh drinking his soda at the same time which made him cough on
the cool elixer.

"Well dude I say we get started on the project eh?" Nat wiped his mouth got
up and started off towards the other guys. Tik nodded following him slowly
looking down at the dirt grass floor kicking some pebbles on the ground
shaping them into a young girls face, he studied it for awhile feeling a
familiar sensation in his body. He kneeled down touching the pebbles
caressing the dirty floor as if it were to come alive in and respond to his
soft touch. He felt a little skip coming from his heart which made him cover
his chest with his other hand, a soft breeze blew his hair out of his face
showing a slender and model like structure. "Hey Tik hurry up man we aint
got all day...and what da hellz yah doing on the floor like that huh!?" Nat
yelled , the other guys looked at Tik and his sillyness,they started to
laugh. "Tik...Tik..HEY TIK!!" Fern shook his shoulders. Tik got up still
focusing on the ground, "Are u feeling okay?" Fern asked in a worried tone,
"Yep I'm fine what made you think I wasnt?" Tik asked walking with one arm
around Ferns shoulder, they've known eachother for a long time. Fern was like
a little brother to him and he was the youngest in the group, and him and
Ferns family have been tight so they go back a long ass time.

It was getting dark , the sun was setting spreading its last rays upon the
old wats of Ayutaya, the glow and warmth of it shined on the guys faces , Tik
got out his tape recorder and his sleeping bag . He founded a spot that was
near an old bench which had strange carvings on the side, it was a name of
some sort but the writing was too old to make out. He spelled out the thai
letters to himself holding a flashlight, "Wahree...and.....what does that
say...?" He whispered , "Wahree...what a beautiful name." He repeated the
name over and over , he shut his eyes falling asleep not knowing there was
someone watching over him...

Chapter 5

Song playing: " Dai yin sah mur nee tur chai mai? Lur sieng bai my tee wai
thong lom tow nun...maah wah row jah glai hang gun dae nai jai nun row kit
tung gun sah mur...jah naan kah nai tee moom troung nee took wee nah tee chun
young koy fow ...fow raw koy tur...chun fow maung dueng dow sah mur young hen
tur song sai tah haa gun riew bai..." 'Ruk tur nee run' By Sirasuk
Ittiphonpanitch

"I've been waiting...I never stoped loving you ...I still remember us
together holding hands , you kissing me lightly on my lips." Tik heard the
voice faintly coming from behide his tent , he got up quickly, grabed his
flashlight unzipping his tent. He went outside pointing the light in ever
dark corner but he didnt see anyone, all he heard and saw was owls and
gheckos. "What the hell was that...?" He said to himself scratching his head
turning around looking at everybody in their tents sound asleep. He sighed
crawling back in, as he was zipping up his tent he heard the sweet haunting
voice again. "P'Tik...I love you..." The voice was above a whisper , a cold
breeze blew his tent open making his breath come out as a chill. He breathed
heavily trying to see what was happening but nothing was happening it was
just the silly wind. "Dame I hate this place..." He said crawling in his
sleeping bag. He shut his eyes trying to get back to sleep but he couldnt get
the creepy feeling away, he felt he wasnt alone and the other being he felt
that was present in his tent... was not human...

Chapter 6

It was morning and the whole gang set foot and the cameras at the temple
where people said was haunted. So far their was no progress and the site of
any supernatural thing was not anywhere, "Maybe we're at the wrong place
guys." Fern said , "Nooo this is the place I mean look at it it looks haunted
to me." Nat replied, "No it doesnt." "Yes it does!" "No!" "Yes!" The two of
them argued away while Tik was begining to drift off into lala land. He's
been like this since yesterday and now he has to feel like this today too, it
was annoying. He tried making his eyes bigger but it wanted to close, "ERRRRR
DAMN IT!!" He cursed getting up going to Fern and Nat who was at eachothers
throats. Tik placed a hand of each of their shoulders which made them stop
and turned their attention to him. "Look I'll take care of this freaking mess
okay!!?" He grabbed the camera from Fern then the tape recorder from Nat and
walked into the temple. His footsteps made an echo sound he walked slowly
almost tripping on some broken beer bottle which some bum probably left
behide. He got out his flashlight and started to set up the camera. After he
was finished he sat down and leaned on this huge pole which used to have
pure solid gold on it, but unfortunately the Burmas melt it off.

The place was unusually hot and humid with gheckos and misquitos Tik
continued slapping his arm. The misquitos are probably gonna suck his blood
dry, he had to stay here for 1 hour and if nothing happens he'll leave.
"Sheeeesh show yourself already...I'm getting sick and tired of this crap."
He yelled looking up into the blackness above him, it wasnt totally dark he
figured that out since he could see some carvings and pictures that remained
in this place. "This place must've been beautiful..." He whispered getting up
to touch the picture that hung in front of him, it was ripped and smelled of
decayed mole. "It was beautiful...more beautiful then you can imagine..." A
girls voice said from behide, Tik spun around to see who it was ,he saw an
outline but not clearly, it was a girl, she wore a beautiful dress that was
white , it went all the way down to her feet. "Who's there, who is that?!" He
yelled stepping closer to the girl, but it was like she moved herself back.
"Do you really want to know who I am?" She asked in a whispered tone which
made him feel dizzy and hot."Yeah tell who you are." He demanded feeling a
tingle ran up his spine, he shivered, the girl gigled. "She stepped out into
the light that was in front of him, Tiks eyes widened as he saw the beauty of
this stranger. Her features were like a fream come true , her eyes were hazel
with a touch of green, her lips were soft pink moist and pouty, her skin was
tan like honey, golden.

"My name is Montira." She answered him, he stood still wanting to look at her
and not talk he felt his throat mucsles were paralyzed. She came closer to
him her thigh touching his. "Do I know you...have we met somehwere before
cuz you seem so familiar." He said . She juss smiled with a deep passionate
look in her eyes. "We have met...in the past ..." She answered touching his
face, he didnt move he didnt mind, even though he had no idea who this angel
was but he felt safe with her, like he was coming home. "Past....?" Tik asked
still shocked, "Yes Tik the past..." His eyes widened even more, "How did you
know my name?!" Montira took her hand away from his soft face. Tik blinked
feeling a sting in his eyes he also felt his legs cramping and he began to
move again , to her. "I asked how did you know my name....?!"

To be continued................

[ Chapter 1 - 3 ]

Next Scenes ... soon !!!