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' Revenge Awaits ' Chapter 3   Story by : [ ]{iSs3Z_ ]
 
 
Characters : Joni Anwar, Louis Scott, Ananda Everingham, Dunk,Florence Vanidia Faivre, Anita Marisa, Jib, Chompoo (Araya), Ann Alicha.

Author note :
some of the cast plays 2 characters in this lakorn…they have different names though…and there are like two different realities in this story from different decades ago and modern life(which is now), but I hope ya’ll really like it and give me some feedbax on it kaiz? Hehe.. KewlZ”… THANX!



…In the days of “Barn Sai Tong”…(1970’s?)

Scene Five : … Uni. Car Park…
Louis pulled into the car park with he’s new blue convertible in front of the other guys. All four guys turned, focusing their attention all on the precious convertible.

*all smiling in amazement*

DUNK: “Ya’ll, check it out!!!”

PAUL: “Hollar, Hollar!! (*smirk*)

MOS: “DAYMZ!!….” (*grins*)

ATHID: “Shiettz!! Beauty machine!!”

*Louis side smiling in honor and proudness, looking up at them through his black sunnies (sexy pose)*

All the other guys started gathering around the blue convertible, touching, commenting and feeling the sensation of the beauty machine. Louis got out of his car and joined the other guys….

LOUIS: “Ain’t she a beauty!!” (smiling)

DUNK: “Where’d you pull out the cash man?”

*Paul starts scratching at the blue coated paint*

LOUIS: (chuckles) “Ay, Ay, c”mon mangz, easy with the paint!!”

*Paul backs away…looks over on the path seeing Jib, Araya and Alicha coming towards them…

PAUL: (Nudges Louis and whispers) “Psst, Louis, I see your cheer squad coming over from 9 o’clock!” (Nudges head over point to the girls direction…)

Jib, Araya and Alicha arrived next to the guys…

Dunk quickly runs up to escort them…

DUNK: “Let me escort you FIONE ladies to a, let’s see… my house at 10 o’clock and we can get it down… you know what I’m sayinz? (chuckles with the other guys)

All three girls give a “whatever look” and does the talk to the hand expression…

JIB/ARAYA/ALICHA: “Whateverrrrrrrrrr… like get a life dumb ass!!”

PAUL/MOS/ATHID/LOUIS (*Starts laughing at Dunk*) : “OOooOOOoooOOo… DAT HURTS!! OUCH BABY!!”

(*All does the boy hood tease*)

The three girls then walked over to Louis…

ARAYA/ALICHA: “Hiiiiiiiiii Louiiisss!!” (waving their hand as they flirted)

(*Jib starts searching around for Joni…*)

JIB: “Err… Where’s Joni at? Anyone seen him?”

All five boys starts looking at each other…

PAUL/MOS/ATHID/LOUIS/DUNK: (*shrugs*): “NOPES!!”


Scence Six :
… The streets in Bangkok…(Joni on his way to Uni. 7:45am)

There was so much traffic in Bangkok, Joni could hardly believe he was going to be late on his first day back. Stuck in traffic he started groaning and moaning.

Joni: “Far out!! What the hell is going on!!! HURRY UP!!” *beep**beep* (he started beeping his car, soon everyone did too)

Joni turned in to the street, he could see he’s Uni just around the left corner. He looked at he’s watch, 5mins left, he was sure he could make it! He sped a little and turned into the corner, speeding in panic. Suddenly a girl ran across the road but stopped straight in front of him. Joni pressed the brakes as quickly as he can… “eeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkk” the car squealed. The 4 wheeled collided left and skidded right along the road, almost crashing into the girl. The car bumped her on the side, and the girl had fallen to the ground, her books scattered across the pavement road. As the car stopped moving, Joni in rage stormed out of the car in fury slamming the driver door. So far he wasn’t having a good morning and if anyone was smart enough, they would know not to mess with the guy at this point. He walked up to the girl, taking big heavy steps.

(yelling and waving his hands about in anger at the girl)

JONI: “WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING!??!!? ARE YOU INSANE?!?!?! DIDN’T YOU SEE……”

(the girl looked up at him in shock and tears, blood bleeding from her knees, forehead and elbows)

Joni drifted off… he didn’t mean to make her bleed, and he’s never ever made a girl cry before. All of a sudden he felt an urge of guilt. The girl started collecting her books in a hurry, not mentioning anything to Joni, not even saying sorry, and hurried off. Before Joni realized she was already gone. Still a bit angry he started mumbling to himself…

(frowning while mumbling)

JONI: “What the hell was her problem!! Tsk! It was her fault, she was the one running in front of me…URRGGH!!”

He walked back to his car… stopped! A book laid open on the ground, Joni reached for it. It was some history book….

(*Joni’s Thoughts*) “It must be that girls book, she must have forgotten about it… SHIT!! I didn’t even catch her name… how am I going to give this back?


……….TO BE CONTINUED!!!!

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