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| ' Revenge Awaits ' Chapter 5 | Story by : [ ]{iSs3Z_ ] |
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| Characters
: Joni Anwar, Louis Scott, Ananda Everingham,
Dunk,Florence Vanidia Faivre, Anita Marisa, Jib, Chompoo
(Araya), Ann Alicha. Other Cast: Paul Carey, Athid Ryu, Mos and heaps more as the story progress Author note : some of the cast plays 2 characters in this lakorn they have different names though and there are like two different realities in this story from different decades ago and modern life(which is now), but I hope yall really like it and give me some feedbax on it kaiz? Hehe.. KewlZ THANX! Bangkok 2001 Scene Nine : (Bangkok University-After History Class) The school bell rang for recess. Instantly the halls and corridors were flooded with students beginning their recess break. Out of the crowd Joni and Louis were walking to their lockers, dodging and giving way to the other students who passed. They started their normal boy convo . LOUIS: So watcha think about Ms. Faivre? JONI: Shes hot manz! She just looks OUR age but shes our teacher, aint that weird? LOUIS: Nawz mangz, doctors now a days can do unexplained surgery!! JONI: HAHA so what? Youre saying our history teachers plastic? LOUIS: Noooo, I think shes just got natural beauty, she dun look a bit plastic made to me! shes got a nice present (he smiles) JONI: *NoDs HEaD * True that!! But she looks ancient in some ways to me I dunno.. (Joni shrugs off his wonders, he didnt want to think too much over little things) (a boy in rollerblades rushed past them, making Joni dropping the old paper brown book) LOUIS: Hey whats that? (Joni bends down to collect the book off the floor, he opens the book up to find ..) JONI: Ay, it looks like a journal *tHiNKs* LOUIS: A WHAT? I never knew you write journals!! (Joni closes that book at this remark and continues the walk to their lockers) JONI: Daym man!! Thats just gay aiight it aint mine. LOUIS: OH! Whos is it then? JONI: Some girl I nearly ran over this morning .she left it!! LOUIS: WHAT?? ARE YOU SERIOUS?!!?? You almost KILLED an innocent girl?? GEEZZ JONI, whats happened to you Dont you know our manhood are dying because there arent enough girls out there for all of us?? .. (he starts getting of the track..) JONI: Hold up mangz, what the hell you on about? The car just bumped her and she fell dropping things she was holding, but she just left this book THATS IT!! she ran off before I could even get her name Out of nowhere a hand slid through Jonis arm, grabbing the journal from his capture. JONI: What the hell? (he turns to face the person, a bit shocked and surprised) LOUIS: JIB?!?! JIB: *lUagHZ* hehe Whats wrong with you people? You look like youre looking at a ghost!! LOUIS: (talking under his breathe while looking away) You are a ghost! JIB: WHAT?!?!?! LOUIS: Err nothing!! I just said , (*brainstorms for an excuse*) Err I .I I gotta go!! Yerh, so Ill see you guys at lunch aiightz!! L8RZ! With that Louis ran off in a flash leaving Joni and Jib alone ..Joni started feeling awkward, him and Jib use to date. He liked her a lot, but she broke it off with him for no better excuse then for another guy, he was never fond of her after that and definitely had no intentions of going through the hurtful cycle again. He was a guy who Jeb la jum!. Though she still suggested to be just friends now that she got dumped by that other guy, everyone knew she was back after Joni because she didnt want to look foolish! JIB: Joni whats this? (She opens the book up flicking through the pages) JONI: OH, its just some book (he tries to grab it back from her, but she wouldnt let him) JIB: (reading from the books back page) Hey look, Marisa? Whos Marisa? Is this her book? JONI: Where? Let me see He tries to grab it out of Jibs hands, but she moves so that he would miss. She laughed in happiness and kept dodging as Joni kept trying to get it from her. But Joni wasnt in the mood to joke around with her. Without realising he wounded up with his arms around her! oh shit! he thought. She looked up at him and they were face to face now. Their faces were so close she could see the hesitation in his eyes. By starring at her beautiful face he couldnt help but feel so hooked on, so he looked away, and took that chance to grabbed the book JONI: Jib, sorry I gotta go catch ya later alright? (he runs off down the corridor without her reply) *Jibs
tHoughTz* (shes smiling to herself) He still loves
me, I felt it
and I know he did
too!
but whos this Marisa girl??
(she turns angry) Grrr
.. she better not be an
interference!! JONI: OI!! (he jumps back startled) As he looks up and down at her, startled not only by her pressence, but by her enhanced beauty as well why has he never seen her before? He got lost . She would have to be the most beautiful woman hed ever seen . He drifted off . All of a sudden he felt a rush of emotions he did not understand, happiness, joyness, sadness, tears etc. As she spoke looking straight at him, so quitely and demanding MARISA: Youve got something that belongs to me! JONI: Huh? ME? (he was definitly lost!) Their eyes were locked on one another, right then he had forgotten all about hes feelings towards Jib and he didnt know why this girl was making hes heart flutter, and hell have to agree that he liked the feeling. Looking deep in her eyes he knew who she was . JONI: OHH that journal . Is yours? *she nods her head showing no emotions, just a still life* *Jonis ThOUgHtZ* Did I just almost run over this girl? Wasnt she bleeding?? How come now she looks all fine not even a scratch? But when I last saw her she was bleeding from knees and elbows thats strange . Still staring at her, he could not help but to flirt a little JONI: *smirking* Hmm , (he leans his shoulder on his locker door very close to her, doing a modelling pose as she just rolled her eyes) mmm if I give your journal back, what do I get in return?? Marisa couldnt believe the guy, what the hell does he really want with her? But she plays along with this flirt, as she takes a step towards him. Their faces were locked on one another, as she tip-toed her fingers from his neck to his mouth asking MARISA: (sexy tone, almost whispering close) What do you want? They look into eachothers eyes, as their faces drew nearer and nearer to eachother *Jonis
ThOUgHtZ* OH SHIT! OH SHIT! OH SHIT!! Is this girl for
real? Is she about to kiss me? Daym Joni, just go for
it!! Shes the one seducing you.. CMON MAN!
You can do it
..just
kiss her!!!
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