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' Revenge Awaits ' Chapter 5   Story by : [ ]{iSs3Z_ ]
 
 
Characters : Joni Anwar, Louis Scott, Ananda Everingham, Dunk,Florence Vanidia Faivre, Anita Marisa, Jib, Chompoo (Araya), Ann Alicha.
Other Cast: Paul Carey, Athid Ryu, Mos and heaps more as the story progress…

Author note :
some of the cast plays 2 characters in this lakorn…they have different names though…and there are like two different realities in this story from different decades ago and modern life(which is now), but I hope ya’ll really like it and give me some feedbax on it kaiz? Hehe.. KewlZ”… THANX!


…Bangkok 2001…


Scene Nine : (Bangkok University-After History Class)


The school bell rang for recess. Instantly the halls and corridors were flooded with students beginning their recess break. Out of the crowd Joni and Louis were walking to their lockers, dodging and giving way to the other students who passed. They started their normal boy convo….

LOUIS: “So watcha’ think about Ms. Faivre?”

JONI: “She’s hot manz! She just looks OUR age… but she’s our teacher, ain’t that weird?”

LOUIS: “Nawz mangz, doctors now a days can do unexplained surgery!!”

JONI: “HAHA… so what? You’re saying our history teacher’s plastic?”

LOUIS: “Noooo, I think she’s just got natural beauty, she dun look a bit plastic made to me!… she’s got a nice present…” (he smiles)

JONI: *NoDs HEaD * “True that!! But she looks ancient in some ways to me… I dunno..”

(Joni shrugs off his wonders, he didn’t want to think too much over little things)

(a boy in rollerblades rushed past them, making Joni dropping the old paper brown book)

LOUIS: “Hey what’s that? …”

(Joni bends down to collect the book off the floor, he opens the book up to find…..)

JONI: “Ay, it looks like a journal…”*tHiNKs*

LOUIS: “A WHAT? I never knew you write journals!!”

(Joni closes that book at this remark…and continues the walk to their lockers)

JONI: “Daym man!! That’s just gay aiight… it ain’t mine.”

LOUIS: “OH! Who’s is it then?”

JONI: “Some girl I nearly ran over this morning….she left it!!”

LOUIS: “WHAT?? ARE YOU SERIOUS?!!?? You almost KILLED an innocent girl?? GEEZZ JONI, what’s happened to you…Don’t you know our manhood are dying because there aren’t enough girls out there for all of us??…..” (he starts getting of the track..)

JONI: “Hold up mangz, what the hell you on about? The car just bumped her and she fell dropping things she was holding, but she just left this book… THAT’S IT!! she ran off before I could even get her name…”

Out of nowhere a hand slid through Joni’s arm, grabbing the journal from his capture.

JONI: “What the hell?” (he turns to face the person, a bit shocked and surprised)

LOUIS: “JIB?!?!”

JIB: *lUagHZ* “hehe… What’s wrong with you people? You look like you’re looking at a ghost!!”

LOUIS: (talking under his breathe while looking away) “You are a ghost!”

JIB: “WHAT?!?!?!

LOUIS: “Err… nothing!! I just said…,” (*brainstorms for an excuse*) ”Err…I ……….I………I gotta go!! Yerh, so… I’ll see you guys at lunch aiightz!! L8RZ!”

With that Louis ran off in a flash leaving Joni and Jib alone…..Joni started feeling awkward, him and Jib use to date. He liked her a lot, but she broke it off with him for no better excuse then for another guy, he was never fond of her after that and definitely had no intentions of going through the hurtful cycle again. He was a guy who “Jeb la jum!”. Though she still suggested to be just friends…now that she got dumped by that other guy, everyone knew she was back after Joni because she didn’t want to look foolish!

JIB: “Joni what’s this?” (She opens the book up…flicking through the pages)

JONI: “OH, it’s just some book…” (he tries to grab it back from her, but she wouldn’t let him)

JIB: (reading from the book’s back page) “Hey look, Marisa? Who’s Marisa? Is this her book?”

JONI: “Where? Let me see…”

He tries to grab it out of Jib’s hands, but she moves so that he would miss. She laughed in happiness and kept dodging as Joni kept trying to get it from her. But Joni wasn’t in the mood to joke around with her. Without realising he wounded up with his arms around her! “oh shit!” he thought. She looked up at him and they were face to face now. Their faces were so close she could see the hesitation in his eyes. By starring at her beautiful face he couldn’t help but feel so hooked on, so he looked away, and took that chance to grabbed the book…

JONI: “Jib, sorry… I gotta go…catch ya later alright?” (he runs off down the corridor without her reply)

*Jib’s tHoughTz* (she’s smiling to herself) He still loves me, I felt it… and I know he did too!……… but who’s this Marisa girl?? (she turns angry) Grrr….. she better not be an interference!!



Scene Ten : (Bangkok University-Joni’s lockers)


Joni arrived at his lockers outta breathe, as he accessed he’s locker turning it’s combination code. He was still confused about his feelings towards Jib, did he still like her? What was he’s feelings? But he surely knew he would never get back with her… not after what she’s done to him…or maybe not? He started feeling angry at himself for even thinking about stupid issues like this, and quickly shoved his books at the back of his locker and slammed the locker doors. As soon as he slammed his locker doors, startled by a girl…standing so close to him, he almost screamed coz she popped out of no where…

JONI: “OI!!” (he jumps back startled)

As he looks up and down at her, startled not only by her pressence, but by her enhanced beauty as well… why has he never seen her before? He got lost…. She would have to be the most beautiful woman he’d ever seen…. He drifted off…. All of a sudden he felt a rush of emotions he did not understand, happiness, joyness, sadness, tears…etc. As she spoke looking straight at him, so quitely and demanding……

MARISA: “You’ve got something that belongs to me!”

JONI: “Huh? ME?” (he was definitly lost!)

Their eyes were locked on one another, right then he had forgotten all about he’s feelings towards Jib and he didn’t know why… this girl was making he’s heart flutter, and he’ll have to agree that he liked the feeling. Looking deep in her eyes he knew who she was….

JONI: “OHH… that journal…. Is yours?”

*she nods her head showing no emotions, just a still life*

*Joni’s ThOUgHtZ* Did I just almost run over this girl? Wasn’t she bleeding?? How come now she looks all fine… not even a scratch? But when I last saw her she was bleeding from knees and elbows…… that’s strange….

Still staring at her, he could not help but to flirt a little…

JONI: *smirking* “Hmm…,” (he leans his shoulder on his locker door very close to her, doing a modelling pose as she just rolled her eyes) “mmm… if I give your journal back, what do I get in return??”

Marisa couldn’t believe the guy, what the hell does he really want with her? But she plays along with this flirt, as she takes a step towards him. Their faces were locked on one another, as she tip-toed her fingers from his neck to his mouth asking…

MARISA: (sexy tone, almost whispering close) “What do you want?”

They look into eachother’s eyes, as their faces drew nearer and nearer to eachother…

*Joni’s ThOUgHtZ* OH SHIT! OH SHIT! OH SHIT!! Is this girl for real? Is she about to kiss me? Daym Joni, just go for it!! She’s the one seducing you.. C”MON MAN! You can do it… ……………..just kiss her!!!


……….TO BE CONTINUED!!!!

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