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| The Thin Line Between Hate&Love : Scene 1-3 | Story by : AnGeLz tai |
| Writer
note : what's up everyone...this is my first
lakorn i put up...i been writting stories...from all my
story ...I chosen this one..(i think its funny) my friend
have read some of it...and now there waiting to read it
here..during the summer....In this story would have some real characters like, Joni, Dome, Jr., Dunk, Sand, Bank, Natalie, Jazky...the others would be anonymous...so you could imagine its you...if you have any comment you could email me at taiangelz@hotmail.com....heheheh this story is like a comdey , love... hope you enjoy!!!!! ~AnGeLz tai~ Main Charactors : Patasan Chan Joni Anwar, Sounnie Kiem (Patasan niece) and Jr. K. Minor Charactors : Natalie (Joni's sis,&Sounnie friend) Jazky(Soun&Natalie friend) Dunk, Sand,Bank(Sand's bro, Patasan friend)Soptiep(Patasan niece&Sounnie niece) Tesha (bad girl,Dome's girlfriend) Katalyn(Patasan friend) Parent: Prissana, Pat- Patasan Parents, Sana, Ken- Sounnie,Mr.Anwar- Joni 's Parents, Mr.Inta -Bank&Sand parents, Suthida, Kerk- Soptiep parents.... Scene 1 - In the country of Thailand and in the city of Bangkok ..on a Saturday morning the sun beaming on Patasan face, still sleeping..... ( got disturb by a knock) Soptiep- (knocking) P'San may i come in? (covering her face in the blanket) Im going in aight! (sneaky,she jump on the bed and took the cover from her face... Patasan- eho!!! naa... do you see me sleeping? (tired) Soptiep- (disappoint) well if you didnt go clubing last night you would'nt sleep this late either... San- and so what...that have to do with me waking up? Soptiep- (try to fool her) oh..P'san forget that today is my special day? San- (still under the cover) what special day? Sop-(pretending not to tell) first you got to get up! San- oh..im not falling for your tricks.... Sop-( making a puppy face) but....(San interuppted) San- but what? Sop- It my first interview at P' Dunk Co. San- (wasnt sure) oh yeah...?? what time is it? Sop- its 11:45am San - then what time you supposed to be there? Sop-(pretending to be worry) umm..11:00! San- (shock) what...!!!!!11:00 now its 11:47 oh...damn...(jump off her bed, ran to her draw to get her clothes.) Sop- P'San I'll go wait downstair and hurry!!!!(smiling) oh..dont forget to wash your face!!(laughing her way out ) - wondering,think she heard that laughing last time...looking unsure...walk down stairs seeing Soptiep eating her lunch... San- (confuse) come on lets go! I thought your dying to go ..... Sop- (knows she trick her again) Oh..P'San I remember the interview is next MOnday...ha! kart tod P'San.... San- (mad) SOPTIEP!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Soptiep knew that P'San going to kill her so she ran up to her room,close the door behind..) - San when after her..but she slam the door faster! San- (yelling from the door) i'm getting you for this... - San back in her room remeber she had to call her mom at Chieng Mai... SCENE 2 - In the city of Chieng Mai...where Patasan's mom was planting her flowers in the yard and talking on her phone with her husband Pat...(at his office) Pat- Pris! when is San coming back..you have to call her..so she would be back for school.. Pris- oh...definitely she's coming back..why your so worry .. Pat- no..its just that she spend to much money going back and forth... Pris- Well Pat you dont have to worry about your daughter...she got my genes...you know!!!( laugh) Pat- oh yeah....ok then i'lll go now in case Patasan call ...bye hun! Pris- ka...bye! -Pris back in her house to wash her hands..then the phone ring...(brinnggg) San- wade Ma.. uh... im leaving tomorrow so.. pick me up ma! Pris- yes San tomorrrow what time? ( San interuppted) San- dont forget to make my favortie food! Pris- ok...San but.....(San interuppted again) San-oh..ma..i know what you gonna say..."im going to be late again"hehehehe 9:00 am ka..bye!!!(hang up) Pris- hery..i was goinng to tell her that her Uncle Ken is picking her up!!! SCENE 3 - Patasan leaving from Bangkok to Cheing Mai...now on the plane... San- (hmm)hery....Monday school then when's Friday night leave home to Bangkok....what a life!!!! -She fell asleep...it finallly reach Cheing Mai ... she step out looking pretty messy (hair) walking to get her luggages..and looking for her parents..she stood at the old place where she use to wait.....10 mintues pass by... San- man... what's taking them so long? (to herself) - Her Uncle Ken were looking for her.... Ken- eoy!!! im late!!!(running) Patasan got up and was going to the window..but before she got there..she accidentally bump into a guy with his watersport things.... San- eoy!!! (putting her luggages down) watch where your going! Joni- oh...excuse me... (in a cocky way) you ....watch way your bumping to!!! San- ehy!!! uh....( thinkin of what to say ) hmmmmm...( seeing her uncle coming) oh...you see i have to go now!!!! Joni- what? are you going to apolize? San- (turn) uh... apoloize..hmmm... let me think about that (she would never) hehe.... Ken- ehy!!! i was looking for you everywhere...(tired) this will be my first and last time to get you.... San- Kart tod Uncle ...(didnt see her parents) uncle where 's my peeps? Ken-oh...their at a meeting...ok lets go San- ok... meeting! -They drove off...he drop San of at her house... SAn got in her bedroom...threw her luggages on the bed..all happy.. San-hmmmmm....lalalaa... good to be home...( a momenet of silent she got up... and calll up BAnk.... - The phone ring sss at Bank's house... Bank- ( pick up) wade krup!!!!!!(frusated from picking the phone all day) San- hey (happy) BAnk!!! im back.... Bank- (confuse) who is this! your another prankster... you stupid retarted people...!!!(hang up on her) San- ain baa!!(mad) what's up with him....whateve r theln.... -She walked toward to her balcony and see her parents's back..there were another person in the back seat..... she ran down to surpise her parents...San ran to the front door to surpise them..... San- Ma..Pa!!!!!! i'm back (yelling from the back of the door) - The parents were on thier way up the door..when they came in she jump in front of them....Surpise!!!! Pat& Pris- oey!!!! San- (sees someone behind her ma) so ma ....miss me!!!(smiling) Pris- well im happy your back...Your pa was so worry about you!!! Pat- (denying) no..why should i worry...i thought she got your genes......(laughing) San- so...who is she...??? Pris- San..I would like you to meet Natalie Mr. Anwar daughter... San- what's up ( to Natalie) Nata- i heard lots about you..from your parents.... Ssan- for real...did they tell about my childhood too???? Pris- ok... now...( try to finish..but San appereace made her stop) umm San why your so messy looking.... San- oh...(walking toward the kitchen) i just got here and let say i didnt wash up yet!!!!(smile) Pris- ok...then go wash up and i'll make your favorite food..and Natalie is joining us too!!! SAn- ka!!! -Running up the stairs to her room wash up and wore her blck wide legs with her t-shirt...hair up in a ponytail..she got down and spot Natalie on the couch.... San- (went up to her) hi.... (putting her hand in the pockets) so..is this our first time we've meet? Nata- I think so.. i alway want ed to meet you San- Why? Nata- your so different the way your ma describe about you....your more with the widelegs style....just like Sounnie.... San- yeah Sounnie...you know her? Nata- yeah!!! San- well...you look cute... your father might be a big business man right? Nata- yeah! San- so your a lonely child? Nata- no...i got a bro ....his name is Joni...you see he suppose to be here too..but little problem happen there.... San- ok...(didnt know who she was talking about) i see... \ Pris call from the dining room.... Pris- San...Nata come and eat... - After they ate...it was around 4:30 pm ..Pris have to bring Natalie home.. San- ma..i could bring her..cause im going to Sounnie's house... Pris- ok..San.. go with P'san Natalie... -As they hug goodbye..San thought to herself..."if i realy did have a sister..would it be really funn!!! Nata- P'San..lets go (in the car) so P'San your finish ing school this year.. San- yeah.... Nata-well Sounnie is having a war with Jr.. San- ok .... (know she 's not here everyday) interesting!!!! - They got there..Mr. Anwar came out... Mr.Anwar- ery! Natalie and you must to be Patasan... San- (greeting) sa wade!! yes iam Patasan!!! Mr.Anwar - thanks for bring Natalie home... San- ook ... i'll be going now!!! -Drive back out ..her way to Sounnie's house...on her way to turn right another car came not seeing her...KABAMMMM!!!!!!!! (hehe just a little):) San- hery!! kon baa!!!! -They both got out from there car..she just got a little dent on the head light...she also knew him too!!!from the airport!! San- (look straight to his face) uh...!!! see what yu did to my car!(angry) Joni-oh...your that girl..that didnt apoloize!!! San- so..its not my fault...its a reaction you know...(try to get a way with it) Joni- first time i see you i knew you those boy/girl that have no manner!!!!! (looking at hher appereance) -SAn standing there listening to this dude!!! San- (interuppted him) uh....excuse me..are you done lecturing me... i dont have time all day here!! and for your 4-1-1 you are wrong....( getting in her car) since im a nice boy/girl wateva you say i acceppted and im not making a big deal out of it YOUNG BOY!!!! Joni- (mad for callling him a boy) I could be older than you..look at you your probably a 15 yrs old girl/boy driving without Daddy permission!!! San- ( didnt care) hey wateva you say to me stick that way. i might be older than ..than..than..( think of what to say,knew she wouldn't win him) -Joni stand there knew she cant win him.... San- ummm.... in not going to fight with some mean people..(she drove off) Joni- (laughing) what a girl!!!! i just want to make her piss of!!!......
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