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| The Thin Line Between Hate&Love : Scene 6 | Story by : AnGeLz tai |
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Main Charactors : Patasan Chan
Joni Anwar, Sounnie Kiem (Patasan niece) and Jr. K. (San) okay..here..(stop the car) (Sou) oh thanks! (nata) oh p'san would you ? (stop) ummm..you busy today? (san) uh ka I have to go soccer pratice…why? (nata) oh see you havent meet my brother yet? (san) oh well next time alrite ka! (nata) ok ka! - San drove off to her soccer practice. Natalie and Sounnie enter the house..maid came in.. (maid) oey! Natalie who you come with? (nata) oh ming Kam this is Sounnie my friend from school. (sou) (greet her) wadeka ming Kam! (maid) (smile) your very cheerful! (Nata) oh ming Kam wheres c'mon? maid- he left the house since morning nata- ( sad) oh I was going to introduce Sounnie to him..well then we'll wait..(running upstair) ming Kam Sounnie is staying over for dinner ok! maid- ok ka! nata- ( in her room) Sounnie how you like my room? Sou- (smile) yeah its pretty neat..how could you stand neatest! nat-(hitting her shoulder) hahaha! your room must da be messy right? sou-(have the goosebump) your room gave me the crept..its too neat..not even a pint of dusk on the draws. (finger touching the draws) nata- NEAT OH MY GOSH!!!!! - Natalie show Sounnie everywhere…finally they got to Nat's bro front door room. nata- hah..you would like this one! (wink at sounnie) (-She turned the door knob but it wa locked)…..oh shietz its lock… sou- (pulling nat back) kay I don’t want to see your brother room lets go do something else until he's back… nata- ok! I agree lets check out the basement see what things we could play outside the yard (Natalie pull out the roller blades) ah…hea take this one and I use my old ones… _ They put on the roller blades
and start roller lading..outside the house…They were racing from
the porch to the driveway.Natalie Joni- (scolled the window, he wanted to say something but Natalie interrupted) Nata- (running to open the driveway) hey! (wave at her brother then smile at Sounnie).you see my brother? isn't he cute??(sounnie froze her eyes wide open well not too big (heehehehe)(punch her on the shoulder) hey hello! wat ya think of my bro huh?? Sou- ya..bro?? I didn’t see him…yettt? Nata- then lets go girl! _ Joni got out and tok out his bags of clothes in the trunk.. Joni- Natalie! care to help with the things!! nata- (yelling) yeah..ka!! - walking toward Joni and help him with his things. Sounnie stood there starring at him… Nata- hellllloooooo! earth to Sounnie!!!!! Sou- ah what??? nothing!! Nata- (smile) what ya think?? (following Joni inside the house) -they in the living room Joni put down his bags and look up at Sounnie.. Nata- C'mon (hold on his arm) this my friend…Sounnie! (smile at her) -They both greet at the same time but Joni say hi and Sounnie said wuz up! nata- (lauging) you guyz must the planned this already! sou- (to joni) may I call you P'Joni? since im young than you…you wouldn’t mind right (smile) joni- aw..that's alrite my (look at Nata) talked lot about you ..you look like you could take me down! sou- why ya say?? joni- yeah..Natalie say you pretty tough for a girl..but that’s good..self defense (showing some kungfu moves) but im not that good…so you like to stay for dinner?? Nata- yeah she's staying for dinner! joni- ok now I better go and change so you guys just chix chat alrite… -then he left to his room… Nata- (sitting on the couch ) so ..Sounnie what you think of him sou- (make a face) I thought
well at first I thought he's going to look cute..but I have to say
no…about you hooking me up with your brother..because I have
the feeling that I cant ..I want him to be my brother..which is better..I
just want to look up to him as God! Nata- so you have no feeling when you see him? I mean like your heart is poppin back and fourth Sou- Nata!!!no… he's your brother I keep him as a brother…he's like P'san age…. Nata- okay then I thought you were attracted to c'mon…well we'll find another girl!!!! -Joni call from upstair!! joni- ( yelling) Nata come here I gota tell you something! nata- ok wait ( to sounnie) wait here okay!(up to his room) what p'Joni?? joni- oh..you know a teen name Jr?? Nata- why? Joni- oh he ask if I was your brother.. and told me to tell you..and Sounnie to meet him at the basketball court ..2morrow at 4:30 p.m. Nata- (confuse) huh?? wait how know you? and when how and why??? Joni- (putting on his shirt) of course he knows me… of course I know Jr..I think.. remember you told me bout him..couple of time..but I don’t want you to go out 2 late 2morrow. nata- alrite 4:30 late???? Joni!! 4:30 late you 12:00 early???? which one is late and early??? Joni- hey …watch out Natalie ! okay!!! 4:30 not late!! Nata- that's better..kay P 'JOni thanks for the news!! ( to herself) wait til Sounnie hears this!( walk down the stairs) - During dinner, Joni told Natalie that he's leaving around 6:30 . After they finished Joni brought Sounnie … Nata- oh..Sounnie don’t forget about the lists…ok…call me up… Sou- ok (walk up to Joni 's car) Joni- tell dad okay! ( to Natalie) -JOni drove her home and drop her at her house…. sou- thanks P'joni, and thanks for dinner! bye!! joni- yep nice meeting you bye!!(give her a wink) bye!! - His way to the club…its full but it was one of his fav club..he have to get in ….he got in and started to look for his friend Dome..JOni bumped into one soccer player.. Kata- hey watch where your going…man!! joni- sorry..(smile) Kata- (turn around) dat's alrite (then walked away) hey pasan ! San- what!!! talk louder hear you!!! kata- what !I cant hear you!! San- (sitting drinking punch,with her soccer crew,they were all in their uniform…) - Katalyn drag San to the bathroom..San
still holding her drinks..they got settle in the bathroom..San still
have the punch in her kata- (stands there) San..man people these day..and I see new faces every time I come here..I hate the new people… San- (drinking the punch) and..who's the new people your talking about and why you care..its better when new people come in (then she noticed that it smell) why it smell!(smelling her cup, Katalyn grab the cup away from her) Kata- San.. the bathroom..you in the bathroom of course it smell..this girl is shieting…..(she pulls San out,San still smellin her cup) stop being dumb!! San- (laugh) eheheheh..blah!! im okay..jus foolin around… -they sit and listen to the music..the music is getting louder ….. Kata- hey! San who's doing the do thing? today?? San- (looking around) huh? I don’t know but I heard from Jazky, that he's from Bkk! (takin another sip from her cup) Kata- b---angkok..what the hell he doing hea? - then a group of guyz walk passed and say.."hey soccer girl you wanna go for a ride" San- (pulling Katalyn) come on lets go dance! - going through the crowds … both girls- excuse me…peoplez coming through!!!!!!!! cute guyz- hey ya..soccer girls.."Chieng Mai"!!!!! Both girls- yeah..Chieng Mai!!! Jazky- (came in) hey ya guy forgot bout me!!! San- sorry..I didn’t see you come on!!! -they all dance having fun…then it stop the speaker came on stage everyone still standing there..listening to the dude..he introduce the new do for the night…okay everyone (Dome walk up the stage) the dude say.. here he comes… Dome- (looking good) what's up Chieng Mai!! - Everyone whistled..girlz cheering for him wow! San ,kata,and Jazky just stand there…saying "come on get off the freaking stage! music!!!!!!!!! San fold her arms and Jazky were yelling for some music!!!! three- hey yo!get off the stage..put on music.. - Dome still introduce himself..and
told everyone that to enjoy..and he's going to take a break..the music
came back on! SAn walked Kata- hey San were your going? San- im going to the restroom (make sign) Kata- What? wateva..(kept dancing w/Jazky) - San got out the bathroom and they bump into each other the sametime (Dome) San not turning back just say sorry and left…Dome after her… Dome- hey 22! (went to stand next to her,she sat on da chairs) hey 22!! ( try to yell, because music too loud!) hey 22! San- (looking at her number, then at Dome, smile) me, what? Dome- you from Chieng Mai or Bkk? San- Why? im a soccer player # 22 baby! Dome- no..you from Bkk? San- nah..do I like I from Bkk? (showing a Chieng Mai tag on sleeves,smiles) Dome- (introducing himself to her) hey im Dome (held ou his hand) SAn- Hery..Dome..(took a sip of punch) hmm..that’s a place to sleep!!!! Dome- heury its my nick.. San- oh I see alrite im going! (put down her glass) Dome- where? (got up) San- where else! Dome!!! the dance floor hahahahha - They all dance..San didn’t feel good she got a stomache !!Dragging katalyn,jazky out the dance floor… Jazky- ehy! Sanwhere your taking us? San- I wanna go home idont feel good naa Kata- you been drinking a lot of punch tonite! San- I guess so… lets go..or you guyz wanna stay hea longer?? Both- were staying here another hour alrite… San- alrite..you can have fun im going Kata- ok then see you at school!! -Dome and Joni walked toward the exit San too..San walked out first.. Dome- (to joni) hey..you see that 22 walking out? Joni- the soccer player…ya got her 7digits too? Dome- not even a smooth talk… Joni- (confuse) idont get it! dome- (they walked to their car) I'll tell you later! -When Joni was backing up his car, almost again…another car came and beeped at him..then it drove off fast…Joni looked at Dome..Dome still unlocking his door..then they all drove off the same time. At week pass til Friday..After school Patasan was packing her clothes to get ready to go BKK. She remember that she promise Bank that she going to hang out with him and firneds at the mall. She forget to buy her tickets to go. So she unpacked her clothes,while unpacking it the phone ring. San- sa wa dee! (folding her clothes) BAnk?? Bank- a good guess are you going to meet me at the mall, second floor at 4:30pm? San- Yeah! ok I know BAnk don’t forget to call your friends kay! bye! -Nataalie on the phone with/Sounnie talking about Joni… Sou- I got five names! (looking at her lists) Nata- Ha..the samething..but lesser … Sou- do you get P'san ..well take her name out..I know P'San is not that kind of persson! Nata- yeah..think so too..shes too tough for P'Joni..he cant handle her! Both- ok! P'San is out! Nata- oh 4:30 meet Jr at ya know where!!!! Sou- ehy! why you have to remind me for! I wonder what he want to argue about!!! Nata- oh..then bring your basketball alright…in case we have war!!hehehe Sou- (laugh) alright..Natalie..bye then! -Sounnie picked Natalie up and went to the basketball court.They got there and no sign of Jr.so they just wait in the car. - Joni in another hand was picking up Tesha (for Dome,well she's going for two guys) Tesha a tall, slim,tan looking from top to bottom, wore this silkly dress that goes up to her knee,hair curly wore skinny high heel shoes,held this DKNY hand bag, wore this silver sunglasses walking out the door, while Joni waits in the front porch. He was distracted by her looks..she came up to him putting her fingertip on his chin! he was red baby! Tesha- (pushing his chin away) nah…JOni(smiling) so where your bringing me….ka? Joni- (all blushing) ek..krup Dome tell us to meet him at the Five Square Mall! so you ready ? Tesha- ka..(in a sweet way) - Joni open the door for her and drove off!! -Patsan wore her blue wide leg jeans and shirt that have a word that said "BRAT" hehehehhe..and wore a long sleeve shirt beneath it..then she told her mom that she's leaving! San- laa laew ma! Pris- where's your luggages? San- eh..ma..I forget to buy the ticketand im going to the mall ok ma..(gave her a kiss) Pris- (seeing San left) heury..she decided to stay home this week… - San got to the mall on theSecond floor looking for Bank and the others. she went to look for them at the food..and found them waiting for her! -Sounnie looked at her watch,Natalie sleeping! Sou- (talking to herself) ehy..4:45
where is that stupid dude..watch when he comes a basketball will be
thrown on his head! (notice Nata-(wiping her eyes) oh ..he's hea..finally Sou- no he's not here yet..well (looking at a white Honda car) I think he's hea now!! let get going Natalie! (getting her ball at the back seat…) -JR came knocking on the window holding his basketball..sounnie got out from her car, putting one hand on her hip…she looked very angry! Sou- Jr… im..(Natalie disturb) Nata- why ya late..you make us wait for you like an hour (exaggrate) hehe!! Sou- who you think you are huh? Jr- I was putting gas in my car..sorry about that..I know your going to get mad because im late.. im sorry. Sou- ok… then what you want to chat bout? Jr- I thought that you would like to play against me!! Nata- so..what your waiting for huh??(walking toward the court) -Sounnie give Jr a face, well
they picks team cant do anything about picking there's only three
..so they play against each other.So -At the mall San and her friends were eating ice cream.. San- (putting a big spoonful of ice cream in her mouth) Bank! so what you wanna go after this? Bank- aw..I just wanna chill here..you know walking around.. San- k… I see im so happy that I stayed here this weekened..to hangout with you guyz..I wanna make this weekened hella fun! (smile) Bank- Yeah we'll try to make it the best week ever… Sand- (came in the conversation) yeah…P'San why your not at Bkk huh? San- oh..I didn’t buy the tickets! Jazky- (came in) no..cause she didn’t want to leave P'Bank all alone (giving Bank a smile,then took sip from her cup) right? Bank- ok now you guyz don’t get it…Tasan forgot t buy her ticket..and probably she didn’t plann to go either!! Jazky- P'San would you please order me a cup of chocolate ice cream? San- yeah..ok(got the money) - San walks toward the stand and saw the mean dude and a girl too. She stood behind him. Tesha- Joni where's Dome? I thought he was going to meet us here… Joni- I think he's late! (looking around then noticed that someone he knew was behind him. (to Tesha) why don’t you go find a table..So when Dome come we have a place to sit… San was disgust ,sticking out her tongue. -Tesha left to find a tables.San stood there for a long times. She cant wait no longer! San- (pushing Joni out the way) excuse me!!! Joni- ow..you (point at her) I knew it was you again..try to start trouble? San- ow! so what taking you so long huh? do you know im in a hurry… Joni- yeah..every times I met you your always in a hurry..do you have lots of errand to do!! San- (ignoring him) oh..thanks keep the change! exuse me..(to Joni, then step his foot..sorry! (smile) Joni- yeah..girl im getting you back just watch ouch! my foot..ain baa! - Back at the basketball court Sounnie Natalie, Jr.. have a riot with the ball Jr- no!! use my ball mine's is better its brand new! Sou- no!!(holding the ball) use mine..its more useable..yours brand new..the ones that is use is more better… Jr- No..the new ones is better yours too old(looking away) Sou- what! (in a disappoint way) you say me…me…my basketball is not good/?? ok… fine…I'll show you how good my ball is! -Jr-..turn around..and Sounnie throw the ball at his back! Sou- ngae ngau!!!!! (kept throwing the ball at him) this how good my ball is you stupid!! Jr- ..oy!!okay Nie..stop it..alright..use your ball then..ouch!(rubbing his back) Nata- ok guys stop it..its only aball..we better off with Sounnie..hers is better! ok..(swak the ball of Sounnie 's hand) come on! Sou- you guy could play.(walk toward the bench) Jr- oy!! Natalie..let her go we just play against each other… Nata- I don’t care..look at you guys one is on the bench and one is on the ground lying there with his ball by his side! heury..im not talking with ya no more…both of you look like you 're not interest with the games (walk toward the big tree, took out her cell,dial Joni's numbers) - San and friend hang at the arcade place! San walked to the restroom,and met Joni again… San- ay! gee…(making face) you again!! Joni- (laugh) huh? why…it’s a coinveince..I always meet you at places..do you follow me? San- (jumping) huh? uh? no! (she
need to go to the restroom)hmmm..exuse me..when I come back we could
argue..but not -San got out and wash her hand..she think he left already… San- (walk out ) eoh! (met Joni around the corner) Joni- (holding his sunglasses) you done! you want to finish arguing? San- (didn’t want to start anything) umm..eoh!! I think you should get someone your own size….and do you really have lots of time to argue?? Joni- umm maybe!! (smile) San stick out her tongue at him…. Jazky- P'San why you so red? San-oh umm…I just ..no I was hot.. I think this room need a AC!! well im going to that book store over there kay?? -San left ..she bumped into Tesha, Dome and Joni… Tesha- Hey!!!!! San- sorry! (kept walking) Dome- hey 22! Joni- (to Dome) your 22 aint gonna come back… San- (turn around) what? Tesha- (mad and jealous) Joni..Dome knows her! why he call her 22..she look so out of style!!!(disgust) San- umm I say I ws sorry ok Tesha- ( walk to Dome) yeah next time watch where your going to!!! San- You see I will but you see some pplz they take up the whole space you know but I don’t want to be so mean…(walked away) Joni-ha ya 22! see her mean attitude (to Dome) Tesha- Dome who is she! Dome- ummm..neva mind lets go.. Joni- Dome? you and Tesha go first I have to call my sis…. Dome- okay man..meet ya at the food court… -Natalie cant reach Joni..it was busy…(Joni was calling her) Sou- (got of the bench) ok..Jr….lets clear…this whole problem out!! Nata- yeah I think you guyz need a brain wash!!! sou- Nata!! Jr- oh..finally you say you wanna clear it.well I want us two to get along like everybody else… Sou-(little laugh) oh I see..but you know im not..this war thing between me and you is going to stop and ..and…(thinking, )and…don’t talk to each other again…and I mean it…come on Natalie lets go!! Nata- wow!!! that’s it!!!!!!!!!! Jr.- wait..how come..you hate me why cant we both just talk nice to each other just once… Sou- (to herself) in your dreams you will~!!!! Nata- Sounnie!!!(heard what Sounnie said) - Pull Natalie in the car and left..At a traffic light they stop…Natalie ask Sounnie.. Nata- you know Jr.is pretty cool..when I just get to know him..he is nice.. Sou- oh ..then be his girlfriend..!!! (all piss) Nata- no..I don’t think soo..you know he and you make a very good …no I mean cute………..couple!!!!!!!(smile) Sou- pik bak!!! naa..I would never ever go out with that dude… Nata- ooohhh!!!Sounnie tell me
the truth..do you like Jr.? Cause you neva act like if you hate him
you would beat the hell out of him Sou- (silent) ummm…ummm… no I hate him I would neva go like that Jr kid!!! Nata- see…I think Jr.like you!! Sou-what make you think that ….huh?? Nata- cause I see it in his eyes (lauging) -Sounnie just make a face……That night P'San call up Sounnie… San- wade..Sounnie home? Sana- (sounnie Mom) this Patasan..long time no see!! San- oh ming Sana..how are you? SAna- im doing fine…ok I'll get Sounnie for you….(calling Sou from the living room)Phone…P'san Sou- (on the phone) what's up p'SAn what you wanna talk about…. San- are you busy tomorrow? Sou- no…why P'San? San-my family and Bank's family are planning to go to the carnivial at the end of Chieng Mai!!! Sou- for real..wait let me ask my ma! ka!(went to ask her mom) p'san my Ma said she going too..I mean the whole family is going…. San- ok… then 6:30 you come to my house and go in a big van… Sou- oh..wait who else is going? San- me,Bank's Family, you and Mr.anwar!! Sou- ..Natalie going too! ( happy) San- Yep..then I'll let you go !!!laa leaw!! la tre sa wat!!! Sou- you too!!
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