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| ' Waiting In Vain ' Part 1 | Story by : ~* imaginazn*~ |
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Note : Wow been a long time since I wrote a
lakorn huh ..... well lets see if I still gots the
skillz. Dont hesitate to email me and tell me what you think. Oh yeah if you get confused and need some clarifying or have any suggestions just hit me up aighty ........... Well have fun reading my lakorn. Part 1 *~*~* Prologue*~*~* Fon hung onto Jonis leg while Lynn clung onto his waist, and all three of their bodies hung over the side of the 10 feet apartment building. Hang on! Joni shouted, dont let go. Blood began to trickle down Jonis wounded right hand as he struggled to hang on to the side of the ledge. I dont want to die! Fon shouted. Lynn felt warm gooey blood coming out of her and felt weak, My babys dying, she thought to herself, I.... I cant hang on, Lynn whispered faintly. Lynn ... hang on .... Joni pleaded, Hang on for me ..... Hang on for the sake of our baby in you. I cant Joni....... Lynn whispered as she began to slip. Joni tried to grasp Lynns arm and lost grip of the ledge. Joni took one last look at Lynn as all three of them fell 10 feet to their deaths. Ill see you next life Lynn.... My love, were Jonis dying words. ~*~ Dont cry baby, Lynn whispered in her wispy voice, Be strong for me..... Lynn sat on her bed in her white nightgown cooing her baby. Before she knew it she began to sob along with her baby, Daddy will come back for us someday.... ~*~ Decades Later~*~ Mr. Anwar smiled proudly at his new born son. His wife looked at him and smiled, You see the little birthmark on his right arm? Mr. Anwar examined the birthmark, Ahhh it says Joni! Is that your name little fella? Mr. Anwar asked his new born son as it squirmed around in his grip, I see son ....... Joni it is. He said laughing to himself, How do you like that name huh? Joni ... Joni Anwar. Joni gurgled and made baby sounds in return. Mrs. Anwar laughed, Sounds like he likes his new name. Then she noticed something on Jonis hand Look at the nasty scar he has on his right hand. Looks like something cut right through his palm, Mrs. Anwar said. Mr. Anwar laughed, Our little Joni must have been a bad boy in his past life. Mrs. Anwar laughed at her husbands theory and looked admiringly at their first child..... Joni. ~* 2 years later *~ 4 year old Joni walked through the hospital corridor clinging onto his dads hand, Daddy why come we here? He asked curiously. Mr. Anwar chuckled at Joni, Were here because .... Not shot again right daddy? Joni asked interrupting his dad. His dad smiled adoringly at his son, No, no shot this time. Joni smiled, Thats good, then he scratched his head, Then why we here? Mr. Anwar cleared his throat, You know how mommy havent been home lately? He began to explain, Remember I told you that mommy was having a new brother or sister for you? Well your mommy just had her baby 2 days ago and were here to take your mommy and the new baby home. Oohhhhhh I see. No wonder mommy no home for 2 days, Joni said nodding his head, I hope baby is a brother. His dad patted him on the head, Sorry to disappoint you buddy. You have a new little sister, he said and walked into Mrs. Anwars room. Joni ran up to his mom who was preparing and packing her things, Mommy Mommy I want to see baby... Joni shrie ked with glee. His mom turned around, Hey there hunnie..... She took his hand in hers and walked him to the baby room as Mr. Anwar followed close behind. Mr. Anwar picked Joni up so that he could see through the window into the baby room. Wow daddy lots of babyz in der, Joni said his mouth forming an O shape, Which one my baby? You see the baby over there in the purple sucking on her bottle? His mom said pointing, Thats your new sister .... Noy. Aww look at that shes yawning ... isnt she a cutie. Mr. Anwar commented. Not as cute as mee .... right mommy and daddy .... Jonis always the cutest in the whole wide world, Joni said feeling a little jealous of all the attention Noy was getting. Just as Joni said that Noy began to cry. Joni covered his ears with his hands, I think mommy and daddy named baby wrong. Shouldnt be Noy should be anNoying .... she make too much noise. They should take battery out of her so she stop crying. Mr. Anwar and Mrs. Anwar laughed and looked at each other, I ca n tell you two are gonna be the best of friends, Mrs. Anwar said sarcastically. Mommy look over der oder baby looking at me, he said pointing to a baby with the name tag that said Florence. I think she likes you, his mom said. Just then Florence opened her eyes and looked right at Joni and Joni smiled in return. ~*20 years later*~ And now you die! Fon shouted at Lynn angrily. Fon tossed up her head and let out an evil laugh, Beg me Lynn ..... beg me to not to kill you .... Fon lifted up the knife and whipped it down ........ Noy woke up abruptly gasping for air. Then she let out a sigh of relief as she realized it was all a nightmare. Rumsy looked at Noy bewildered, Another nightmare? She asked. Noy nodded in response to her 18 year old cousins question. What was it this time? Rumsy asked. Noy ran her hand through her curly hair to recall her memory, I dont know..... It was soooo weird. There were these two girls .... they were like fighting over something ...... and one of the girls had a knife .... I couldnt see their faces though.... but I remember the girl with the knife calling the other girl ..... LYNN. Rumsy stared at Noy, Hmm weird. Anyways its almost time for school so why dont you get your bootie up and go get ready ...... You dont want to be the queen of tardy in your new high school do you? Noy smiled, I wouldnt mind, and went back to sleep. ~*~ Joni could you wake Noy and Rumsy up for me? His mom shouted from downstairs. Krup ma, Joni shouted back, Gosh these girls .... they must be the laziest chicks I know ..... Joni grumbled to himself as he headed for Noys bedroom and bumped into Rumsy. Hey watch where youre going beaver! Rumsy shouted. How many times I gotta tell you not to call me that? Sheesh Im 20 now when are you two gonna give me some respect, Joni said smacking Rumsy on the head, Anyways Noy up yet? Joni asked. Rumsy shook her head, Knowing her? You think shed be up? I dont think so. She might be 18 but she doesnt act any older then a 12 year old, Rumsy said as she headed to the bathroom. Joni sighed and walked into the bedroom and saw his sister still buried under the covers, Wake up lazy head ....... Time to go to school. Joni said pulling the covers off of her. Go away ..... I want to sleep.... Noy responded sleepily. Joni sat down on her bed, If you dont get your ass up Imma pimp your ass to the terrorist people! Noy opened her eyes and glared at her brother ..... Im telling! Noy hopped off her bed and headed downstairs with Joni close behind her, Mommy ...... Daddy ........ P Joni threatened to sell me......... your cute... adorable... innocent ..... beloved daughter, to the terrorist ..... Joni sighed and shook his head, See dad...She never changes....Ever since the first day I saw her at the hospital I knew she was gonna be a lot of trouble. She never does anything. All she does is sleep and when shes not sleeping shes up making noises. She is sooooooo ANNOYING! You should have left her at the hospital when she was a baby Ma, Joni teased. Noy ran up and hugged her mom, Mommy smack P Joni for me .... Hes being a meanie to me! Noy pouted, Daddy you have to make P Joni live in the garage from now on. Hes mean! Rumsy came downstairs, Whos living in the garage? You are dummie, Joni responded. Noy laughed, Hey P Joni you just made a rhyme. Rusmy the dummmie. Mrs. Anwar laughed, Okay k ids thats enough. Now, Joni and Rumsy sit and have your breakfast and Noy go get ready for school. Okay .... kaaaaaa, Noy said sticking her tongue out at Joni as she ran pass him. ~*~ Hurry the hell up Louis! Florence shouted at her step brother banging on the bathroom door, Youre a fucken guy I dont know why the hell you need so much damn time in the bathroom! Louis opened the door and looked at Florence, Damn someone is pmsing this morning. Florence smacked Louis up side the head and walked into the bathroom, Dang who invented step brothers anyways .... theyre such a pain in the ass! Louis walked to the kitchen, Good morning Mom, Louis said trying to sound cheery. You guys fighting over the bathroom again? His mom asked. Florence walked into the kitchen, If we had a HOUSE with TWO bathrooms maybe we wouldnt have these problems MOTHER! Im tired of living in this beat up apartment. When is Louiss dad gonna make enough money to get us out of this dump. Maybe you should find yourself another man and get rid of these two useless father son. Come on Florence .... give mom a break and for once SHUT UP! Louis said. Florence glared at Louis, Shes not your mother okay! Shes my mother and I can say whatever I want to her. Louis was going to respond but then Mrs. Faivre tapped Louis on the shoulder and shook her head, Please Louis ..... she pleaded, Lets try to have breakfast without any confrontation. Florence and Louis glared at each other. I dont want no breakfast .... Im outta here! Florence shouted grabbing her school supplies and slamming the door as she walked out. ~*~ (at school) Damn why am I so nervous? Noy asked herself as she walked to her locker, dur Noy its only your first day in a new school! Of course you have to be nervous. Noy said answering her own question. Noy walked clumsily down the corridor to her locker to get her stuff for her next class. Balancing her books in one arm Noy pulls up her glasses and struggles to get her locker opened. After a few tries Noy punches her locker, Damn stupid fucken locker, Noy whispered not wanting any teachers to hear her cuss. I heard that, a deep voice came from behind her. Noy jumps startled by the voice, thinking it was a teacher, and drops her books. She lowers her head and adjusts her glasses nervously, Me say somsing rong? Me no Speeka anglis goot. Kid ova der say damn stupid fucken locker iss oder way ob saying ... me need help to open locker. Noy said in a fobbish tone hoping the teacher wont punish her for her profanity. Louis laughs, Oh really? Noy looks up at Louis and realized he wasnt a teacher. Feeling st upid Noy looks at her books and gave a defeated groan. She sighed and bends down to pick up her books, Im definitely going to be late now, Noy mumbles to herself. You new here? Louis asked bending down to help Noy pick up her books. Noy pushes up her sliding glasses one more time and snatches her books from Louis, Dats none of yo business! She responded. Okay. No need to get offensive. Anyways need help with your locker? Louis asked. Its okay, I can do it myself, Noy said with her same monotone and continued struggling to get her locker opened. Louis stood there grinning at Noy, enjoying seeing her struggle. Then he sighs and pounds his fist against her locker, There you go, Louis says as he pops Noys locker open for her, By the way Im Louis. My lockers next to yours. Noy throws her books into her locker, Why you telling me for? Not like I give a care. Louis looks at Lynn appalled, Dang why is every girl being so damn bitchy today? Louis asked. Because maybe you such a fucken buggaboo ! Noy said poking one finger into Louiss chest and walked off. Louis shook his head, OH hell naw that girl didnt just diss me! Shit that never happened to me before. Maybe Im loosing my charms? Louis strolled to class waving to the girls who stood there staring at him dreamily, each girl secretly wishing that he was their man. Louis ran his hand through his hair and straightened out his collar, Ahhh I still got it, he said satisfied with the attention he got from the girls. ~*~ That night Noy waited anxiously by the window for her parents to come home. Why dont you go get some sleep Noy, Rumsy suggested patting Noy on the shoulder, Im sure youre parents will be home in the morning. Dont worry too much. Noy gave Rumsy an annoyed sigh and walked over to the couch, P Joniiiiiiii, she shouted, Why is mommy and daddy taking so long to come home today? Joni walked over and sat next to his sister, I wish I knew, he replied starting to feel a little worried too. Rumsy sighed and took a seat next to Joni and Noy. Its weird mom and dad never stays out this late, Noy said giving Joni and Rumsy a worried look, I have a feeling something bad happened. Rumsy and Joni looked at each other, they knew that whenever Noy had a sick sense she usually was never wrong. Suddenly the phone rang and all three jumped up and raced for the phone. Joni grabbed the receiver, hello, he said. Is this the Anwars residence? The voice on the other side asked. Yes it is, Joni responded. The voice on the other end sighed, Im doctor Dillon from Bangkok Hospital, Im afraid I have some bad news for you........... ..........TO BE CONTINUED ....
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