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' Waiting In Vain ' Part 1   Story by : ~* imaginazn*~
 
 
Authors Note : Wow been a long time since I wrote a lakorn huh ..... well let’s see if I still gots the skillz.
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Part 1



*~*~* Prologue*~*~*

Fon hung onto Joni’s leg while Lynn clung onto his waist, and all three of their bodies hung over the side of the
10 feet apartment building. “Hang on!” Joni shouted, “don’t let go.” Blood began to trickle down Joni’s wounded
right hand as he struggled to hang on to the side of the ledge. “I don‘t want to die!” Fon shouted. Lynn felt warm
gooey blood coming out of her and felt weak, “My baby’s dying,” she thought to herself, “I.... I can’t hang on,”
Lynn whispered faintly. “Lynn ... hang on ....” Joni pleaded, “Hang on for me ..... Hang on for the sake of our
baby in you.” “I can’t Joni.......” Lynn whispered as she began to slip. Joni tried to grasp Lynn’s arm and lost grip
of the ledge. Joni took one last look at Lynn as all three of them fell 10 feet to their deaths. “I’ll see you next life
Lynn.... My love,” were Joni’s dying words.

~*~

“Don’t cry baby,” Lynn whispered in her wispy voice, “Be strong for me.....” Lynn sat on her bed in her white
nightgown cooing her baby. Before she knew it she began to sob along with her baby, “Daddy will come back
for us someday....”

~*~ Decades Later~*~

Mr. Anwar smiled proudly at his new born son. His wife looked at him and smiled, “You see the little birthmark
on his right arm?” Mr. Anwar examined the birthmark, “Ahhh it says Joni! Is that your name little fella?” Mr.
Anwar asked his new born son as it squirmed around in his grip, “I see son ....... Joni it is.” He said laughing to
himself, “How do you like that name huh? Joni ... Joni Anwar.” Joni gurgled and made baby sounds in return.
Mrs. Anwar laughed, “Sounds like he likes his new name.” Then she noticed something on Joni’s hand “Look at
the nasty scar he has on his right hand. Looks like something cut right through his palm,” Mrs. Anwar said. Mr.
Anwar laughed, “Our little Joni must have been a bad boy in his past life.” Mrs. Anwar laughed at her husband’s
theory and looked admiringly at their first child..... Joni.

~* 2 years later *~

4 year old Joni walked through the hospital corridor clinging onto his dad’s hand, “Daddy why come we here?”
He asked curiously. Mr. Anwar chuckled at Joni, “We’re here because ....” “Not shot again right daddy?” Joni
asked interrupting his dad. His dad smiled adoringly at his son, “No, no shot this time.” Joni smiled, “That’s
good,” then he scratched his head, “Then why we here?” Mr. Anwar cleared his throat, “You know how mommy
haven’t been home lately?” He began to explain, “Remember I told you that mommy was having a new brother
or sister for you? Well your mommy just had her baby 2 days ago and we‘re here to take your mommy and the
new baby home.” “Oohhhhhh I see. No wonder mommy no home for 2 days,” Joni said nodding his head, “I
hope baby is a brother.” His dad patted him on the head, “Sorry to disappoint you buddy. You have a new little
sister,” he said and walked into Mrs. Anwar’s room. Joni ran up to his mom who was preparing and packing
her things, “Mommy Mommy I want to see baby...” Joni shrie ked with glee. His mom turned around, “Hey there
hunnie.....” She took his hand in hers and walked him to the baby room as Mr. Anwar followed close behind. Mr.
Anwar picked Joni up so that he could see through the window into the baby room. “Wow daddy lots of babyz in
der,” Joni said his mouth forming an O shape, “Which one my baby?” “You see the baby over there in the purple
sucking on her bottle?” His mom said pointing, “That’s your new sister .... Noy.” “Aww look at that she‘s yawning
... isn‘t she a cutie.” Mr. Anwar commented. “Not as cute as mee .... right mommy and daddy .... Joni‘s always
the cutest in the whole wide world,” Joni said feeling a little jealous of all the attention Noy was getting. Just as
Joni said that Noy began to cry. Joni covered his ears with his hands, “I think mommy and daddy named baby
wrong. Shouldn’t be Noy should be anNoying .... she make too much noise. They should take battery out of her
so she stop crying.” Mr. Anwar and Mrs. Anwar laughed and looked at each other, “I ca n tell you two are gonna
be the best of friends,” Mrs. Anwar said sarcastically. “Mommy look over der oder baby looking at me,” he said
pointing to a baby with the name tag that said Florence. “I think she likes you,” his mom said. Just then
Florence opened her eyes and looked right at Joni and Joni smiled in return.

~*20 years later*~

“And now you die!” Fon shouted at Lynn angrily. Fon tossed up her head and let out an evil laugh, “Beg me
Lynn ..... beg me to not to kill you ....” Fon lifted up the knife and whipped it down ........

Noy woke up abruptly gasping for air. Then she let out a sigh of relief as she realized it was all a nightmare.
Rumsy looked at Noy bewildered, “Another nightmare?” She asked. Noy nodded in response to her 18 year
old cousin’s question. “What was it this time?” Rumsy asked. Noy ran her hand through her curly hair to recall
her memory, “I don’t know..... It was soooo weird. There were these two girls .... they were like fighting over
something ...... and one of the girls had a knife .... I couldn‘t see their faces though.... but I remember the girl with
the knife calling the other girl ..... LYNN.” Rumsy stared at Noy, “Hmm weird. Anyways it‘s almost time for school
so why don‘t you get your bootie up and go get ready ...... You don‘t want to be the queen of tardy in your new
high school do you?” Noy smiled, “I wouldn’t mind,” and went back to sleep.

~*~

“Joni could you wake Noy and Rumsy up for me?” His mom shouted from downstairs. “Krup ma,” Joni shouted
back, “Gosh these girls .... they must be the laziest chicks I know .....” Joni grumbled to himself as he headed for
Noy’s bedroom and bumped into Rumsy. “Hey watch where you’re going beaver!” Rumsy shouted. “How many
times I gotta tell you not to call me that? Sheesh I‘m 20 now when are you two gonna give me some respect,”
Joni said smacking Rumsy on the head, “Anyways Noy up yet?” Joni asked. Rumsy shook her head, “Knowing
her? You think she’d be up? I don‘t think so. She might be 18 but she doesn‘t act any older then a 12 year old,”
Rumsy said as she headed to the bathroom. Joni sighed and walked into the bedroom and saw his sister still
buried under the covers, “Wake up lazy head ....... Time to go to school.” Joni said pulling the covers off of her.
“Go away ..... I want to sleep....” Noy responded sleepily. Joni sat down on her bed, “If you don’t get your ass up
Imma pimp your ass to the terrorist people!” Noy opened her eyes and glared at her brother ..... “I’m telling!”
Noy hopped off her bed and headed downstairs with Joni close behind her, “Mommy ...... Daddy ........ P’ Joni
threatened to sell me......... your cute... adorable... innocent ..... beloved daughter, to the terrorist .....” Joni
sighed and shook his head, “See dad...She never changes....Ever since the first day I saw her at the hospital I
knew she was gonna be a lot of trouble. She never does anything. All she does is sleep and when she’s not
sleeping she’s up making noises. She is sooooooo ANNOYING! You should have left her at the hospital when
she was a baby Ma,” Joni teased. Noy ran up and hugged her mom, “Mommy smack P’ Joni for me .... He’s
being a meanie to me!” Noy pouted, “Daddy you have to make P‘ Joni live in the garage from now on. He‘s
mean!” Rumsy came downstairs, “Who’s living in the garage?” “You are dummie,” Joni responded. Noy
laughed, “Hey P’ Joni you just made a rhyme. Rusmy the dummmie.” Mrs. Anwar laughed, “Okay k ids that’s
enough. Now, Joni and Rumsy sit and have your breakfast and Noy go get ready for school.” “Okay ....
kaaaaaa,” Noy said sticking her tongue out at Joni as she ran pass him.

~*~

“Hurry the hell up Louis!” Florence shouted at her step brother banging on the bathroom door, “You’re a fucken
guy I don’t know why the hell you need so much damn time in the bathroom!” Louis opened the door and looked
at Florence, “Damn someone is pms’ing this morning.” Florence smacked Louis up side the head and walked
into the bathroom, “Dang who invented step brothers anyways .... they’re such a pain in the ass!” Louis walked
to the kitchen, “Good morning Mom,” Louis said trying to sound cheery. “You guys fighting over the bathroom
again?” His mom asked. Florence walked into the kitchen, “If we had a HOUSE with TWO bathrooms maybe
we wouldn’t have these problems MOTHER! I‘m tired of living in this beat up apartment. When is Louis‘s dad
gonna make enough money to get us out of this dump. Maybe you should find yourself another man and get rid
of these two useless father son.” “Come on Florence .... give mom a break and for once SHUT UP!” Louis said.
Florence glared at Louis, “She’s not your mother okay! She’s my mother and I can say whatever I want to her.”
Louis was going to respond but then Mrs. Faivre tapped Louis on the shoulder and shook her head, “Please
Louis .....” she pleaded, “Let’s try to have breakfast without any confrontation.” Florence and Louis glared at
each other. “I don’t want no breakfast .... I’m outta here!” Florence shouted grabbing her school supplies and
slamming the door as she walked out.

~*~

(at school)

“Damn why am I so nervous?” Noy asked herself as she walked to her locker, “dur Noy it’s only your first day in
a new school! Of course you have to be nervous.” Noy said answering her own question. Noy walked clumsily
down the corridor to her locker to get her stuff for her next class. Balancing her books in one arm Noy pulls up
her glasses and struggles to get her locker opened. After a few tries Noy punches her locker, “Damn stupid
fucken locker,” Noy whispered not wanting any teachers to hear her cuss. “I heard that,” a deep voice came
from behind her. Noy jumps startled by the voice, thinking it was a teacher, and drops her books. She lowers
her head and adjusts her glasses nervously, “Me say somsing rong? Me no Speeka anglis goot. Kid ova der
say damn stupid fucken locker iss oder way ob saying ... me need help to open locker.” Noy said in a fobbish
tone hoping the teacher won’t punish her for her profanity. Louis laughs, “Oh really?” Noy looks up at Louis and
realized he wasn’t a teacher. Feeling st upid Noy looks at her books and gave a defeated groan. She sighed
and bends down to pick up her books, “I’m definitely going to be late now,” Noy mumbles to herself. “You new
here?” Louis asked bending down to help Noy pick up her books. Noy pushes up her sliding glasses one more
time and snatches her books from Louis, “Dat‘s none of yo business!” She responded. “Okay. No need to get
offensive. Anyways need help with your locker?” Louis asked. “It’s okay, I can do it myself,” Noy said with her
same monotone and continued struggling to get her locker opened. Louis stood there grinning at Noy, enjoying
seeing her struggle. Then he sighs and pounds his fist against her locker, “There you go,” Louis says as he
pops Noy’s locker open for her, “By the way I’m Louis. My lockers next to yours.” Noy throws her books into her
locker, “Why you telling me for? Not like I give a care.” Louis looks at Lynn appalled, “Dang why is every girl
being so damn bitchy today?” Louis asked. “Because maybe you such a fucken buggaboo ! ” Noy said poking
one finger into Louis’s chest and walked off. Louis shook his head, “OH hell naw that girl didn‘t just diss me!
Shit that never happened to me before. Maybe I‘m loosing my charms?” Louis strolled to class waving to the
girls who stood there staring at him dreamily, each girl secretly wishing that he was their man. Louis ran his
hand through his hair and straightened out his collar, “Ahhh I still got it,” he said satisfied with the attention he
got from the girls.

~*~

That night Noy waited anxiously by the window for her parents to come home. “Why don’t you go get some
sleep Noy,” Rumsy suggested patting Noy on the shoulder, “I’m sure you’re parents will be home in the
morning. Don‘t worry too much.” Noy gave Rumsy an annoyed sigh and walked over to the couch,“ P’ Joniiiiiiii,”
she shouted, “Why is mommy and daddy taking so long to come home today?” Joni walked over and sat next
to his sister, “I wish I knew,” he replied starting to feel a little worried too. Rumsy sighed and took a seat next to
Joni and Noy. “It’s weird mom and dad never stays out this late,” Noy said giving Joni and Rumsy a worried
look, “I have a feeling something bad happened.” Rumsy and Joni looked at each other, they knew that
whenever Noy had a sick sense she usually was never wrong. Suddenly the phone rang and all three jumped up
and raced for the phone. Joni grabbed the receiver, “hello,” he said. “Is this the Anwar’s residence?” The voice
on the other side asked. “Yes it is,” Joni responded. The voice on the other end sighed, “I’m doctor Dillon from
Bangkok Hospital, “I’m afraid I have some bad news for you...........”


..........TO BE CONTINUED ....
Next --- > Part 2
 
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